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Baby You Just Mean So Much
My Heart Races Everytime Ya Go To Touch
I Realize I'm Lucky To Be Together With You
Don't Change A Single Thing You Do

Who Woulda Ever Thought We Would Ended Up Together
Kept Callin You Bitch Than Things Got Better
I Realized I Was Only Seeing You On The Surface
I Wasn't Livin Life With A True Purpose
The More We Spent Time With Each Other
The More My Heart Continued To Flutter
You Have Accepted Me When I Didn't Deserve
I Made A Crucial Mistake Which Struck A Nerve
You Stuck Around Cause You Saw Something Special
You Took That Mountain All To Casual

Baby You Just Mean So Much
My Heart Races Everytime Ya Go To Touch
I Realize I'm Lucky To Be Together With You
Don't Change A Single Thing You Do

Thankful For The Decision From Your Viewpoint
I Always Think Twice So I Don't Disappoint
What I Feel For You Can't Be Mentioned In Words
We Can't Slip Or Fall, We Movin Upwards
We Proved We Can Overcome Difficult Times
We Talk Things Through Our Thoughts Aren't Sublime
This Feeling Isn't Foreign, I Been Here Before
Took Me Two Years To Open A Real Door
Now I Am Yours Forever Till You Stray
Baby I Love You I Am Here To Stay

Baby You Just Mean So Much
My Heart Races Everytime Ya Go To Touch
I Realize I'm Lucky To Be Together With You
Don't Change A Single Thing You Do

3 links:
Maven:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95979
Mindless:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96343
BadAndy:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96347

/\ nice very meaningfull makes me think of my ex

you should work on your flow a little more seems kinda choppy
vocab wasn't deep but wasnt elementary either
overal cool drop

make sure to drop a responce on my open mic ima be dropping one in about 10 minutes

uppin

I liked this...but not as an Open Mic.

Not hating...but it seemed like this had more of a poetic sense to it. Know what I mean? There wasn't a flow like there is to a song. It seemed like you had to literally state each sentence for it to sound right. As for the meaning and depth, this was excellent. Just not in the right forum ;)

Good shit though.

this was a tight piece it made think of alot of thing in the past

on the return tip up on my thread lyricallycrazy03- lil freestyle

yeah lethargic I hear ya...

whatever I write I just post...so if it get's moved than that's cool too

uppin.