battle up 2way.....
 

10 lines,you spit 1st,check in......in 5mins........................
:shoot: ................

yippe cie ya jon werent u in die hard/
no u were in westerns u fukn retard/
thinkin u the boy playin with ya guns/
while im fukn ya girl with the massive lungs/
shes likes my style cos im well hung/

wot was it like in the wild wild west/
ur friends with will smith? ur a fukn mess/
now jon ya rap name really is a blunder/
is that reason that u six foot under?
y am i even battlin u thats wot i wonder

finally you spit....................i'm droppin' now..................

ill battle

you tryin' elevate your status but you've been decline....
you could be ice-out and you still won't shine...
bullets like the deadly virus when you get sprayed...
ain't cure for ya ass when you catch the killer A.I.D.S.....
your style is like nyquil its giving me a snooze....
winning this battle is impossible nigga you ain't TOM CRUISE...
no matter how far you run i'd gun you down like REGGIE MILLER...
you like the NEW YORK KNICKS nigga you'll never be a winner...
ya rhymes are back-up like SHIT in a sewer youse smelly...
next time nigga bust ya gun like X did in BELLY instead of rhyming like NELLY....

computer was freezing thats why i took so long.........lets get some votes i for this battle once you can votes just make your constuctive criticism and vote to get this over quick.....good battle 2way.......1....holla....

shit i thought i was in the front line DAMMMMMMNNNNNN...............

aiyo, you battlin' HERE?

or just want some input on ya style?