Irv Vs. BugZ-BunNy
 

yo here chekc this heres his verse...

Dont come at me, Ill move quick to blast ya/
I keep the heat tucked like I was moving to alaska/
Dog, ill grab the heat/
Dont need beef, ill go elmer fudd style and hunt me some rabbit meat/
So you wont run into trouble, ill stab ur feet/
Im a vet, you a newbie to this game/
Ur rhymes is just as looney as ur name/
I put u in a moment of silence, u aint gotta sing the national anthem/
u can't see me in this game so u can call me the phantom/

heres my verse now...

yo kid look at you Mike jackson as your avatar//
your tryna make it in the rap game but you aint goin far//
ima murder you in this battle im the killer//
u ran into the ugly tree n u look like jackson did in THRILLER//
look kid u bite so hard i see ur ghost-writers rite threw you...//
you couldnt touch me in this battle if u were literally stuck to me with glue...//
i may be new to this site, n the rap game but im only 12 years old...//
but youd have to -freeze~to~death- for your rhymes to be sick or cold...//
tryna battle me puts ur chance of winning at High~riSk//
for you to be Ill you'd have to catch the West'Nile~ViRuS...//

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dont no yo this wus a pretty close battle i think bugz threw harder punches n personals n had a better flow but i liked irvs verse too so my vote = TIE hit the links in my sig up yo....

sorry yo i cant poll a vote yet but please hit links in my sigup yo thanks alot Peace.................._______________________

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vote - bugz

punchlines - bugz
structure - b ugz
wordplay - bugz
rhyme scheme - bugz


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damn cannabarz when u get 100 posts poll your vote on hear dawg i hate that 100 posts rule man i need peopel to vote on this battle its takin to fuggin Longg.....

flow-bugz
punches-bugz
entertainment-bugz
opener-bugz
closer-bugz

hmmm, my vote goes to----bugz

flow=Bugz
Punches=Bugs
Complex=bugs
Punchlines=bugz
Simple spit=irv

overall=Bugz


good battle

I liked your flow Bugz 12 years old? Nicely fuckin done than. It was a nice flow you had goin and I liked your punches and metaphors. Good job though both of you.

Imma have to go with irv on dis one, i just liked his verse more than bugz, it really made me laugh when he went

Dog, ill grab the heat/
Dont need beef, ill go elmer fudd style and hunt me some rabbit meat/

Dat was a good punchline, but styll a very close battle, so my decision was made by that punchline.

Vote- Irv