CORRUPTED VISIONS: Elevation
 

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Consecration not Desecration is the way to elevation
Without it damnation would increase with magnification
Aint to compensation for trying but cooperation
Will help on the road to rising like helium’s inflation
Taking you higher ignite the fire keep burning it strong
Strength in numbers is what will keep the sight goin on
With New catz joining no jeopardy its where we’re from
Ya start at the bottom and work up singing to the same song
Cos some have flow but need stronger meta’s to grow
Some need word play to establish and emerge from the smoke
Others need structure jus like a house needs foundations
Cos in our own way we can all touch a bit in realisation
-That even the vets don’t have it all but yet they stand tall
Cos Stature is knowledge. Knowledge is power to recall
To enthral the newb’s help them CORRUPT their VISIONS
Expand their vocab to increase their limited lyrical decisions
The key to wisdom is like NUCLEAR fusion a mixture
Atom by atom we grow mutating constant changing of fixtures
Read the literature and absorb through written osmosis
Through a permeable membrane you can almost control this
What ya strive for is reading creating a state of extreme hypnosis…

reppin....

This was damn dope, your vocab was incredible flow was good, i fouind this really captured the reader you really showed potential in this also you inspired the noobs which was unique great piece props man

yo can you peep my open mic collabo with K4M or drop an honest vote on my battle in my sig thanks man pz

Yeah i agree with rule this was real nice man.....your structure was good in this like always lol....same with your vocab good like always lol...your flow in this was real nice man, stayed on point through out the whole piece i thought and didnt really get off at all...overall i thought this was a good piece man....keep at it.

the vocab was tight but alot of the words made no sense belongin wit it, it seemed like u just rhymed big words...
jsut my prespective.. other then that tight flow,wordplay
9.5/10

you obviously dont understand the words then..but no matter.........thnx anyways......jus look them up if ya unsure trust me it makes sense

yes i'd like to aplogize, I replied to a wrong thread...
let me undue my wrong and give u a reply

Flow: Sick
Vocab: nice
wordplay: good

9/10

again sorry
hope no beef
pz

Loco thnx man...and yeah no beef.........jus wanted to point it out......pZ......oh and you up for a collab?....PM me....

Another English Rapper wit skillz....Good shit mate, enjoyed thios piece

feedback plz...thnx

hit this up dont sleep on it..plz...thnx

Consecration not Desecration is the way to elevation
Without it damnation would increase with magnification
Aint to compensation for trying but cooperation

/\forced and shitty

after that you had great flow and vocab wasnt forced anymore and everything was nice

it aint no forced shit...so wtf you talking bout