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FormulaMC 12-04-03 11:52 PM

Lethal Lyricist. .
 
I See Ya'll Comin Up With Bullshit, Ain't Talkin Bout Shit, Tryna Get That Commercial Fame When Ya Can't Rap. Yesterday, I Told A MuFucka Ta Rap, And This Kid Came Back 20 Minutes Later With A Fuckin Christmas Present. That's Proof Of Ghostwriting. . Man Ya'll Fucks Is Lame. .

I've Been Hearin The Calls, People Want The Best
I'm Known To Leave Fucks Bleedin Out They Chest --
More Than They Bitch When She Fucked Up That Pregnancy Test
I Light Fucks Up Like A Propane, Hold A Match To Ya Brain
That's Ignitin' While I'm Strikin' Like Lightnin'
Goddamn Mayn, I'm Electricutin Ya Frame
I'm Insanely Dope, One Lyricist, So Fuckin Lethal
I'm Maintaining Evil While Remaining For The People
See-Through The Lies, Truth Disguised, Fucks Is Fake
They Crucify My Lines, Hang Um Up Like Jesus On The Stake
Bastards Is Mad --
Cause I Spit An On-Slaught Of Rhymes Through My Teeth
The Poor Is Sad Cause I'm Spittin Gems Everytime I Speak
A Lyricist Who's Knowledge Is On Levels Of College N Grad School
Since I'm Smarter My Common Sense Is Ta Pop N Bag Fools
Delivering Death Like Fast Food, When I'm In The Mood To Kill
I Probly Will, Reach For The Still, Double L Fucka, N Thas Real

[Chorus]
What Am I? The Goddamn Lethal Lyricist
What Do I Do? Rid Of The Hideous And Spit The Dopest Shit
Why I Do This? Cause I'm The Only One On This Level Man
And? If You Can't Hear The Dopeness, Balance Ya Treble Man

They Thought I Was Playin Sick, Now They Ain't Sayin Shit
I'm Constantly Sprayin Clips Leavin MC's Holy On The Jesus Tip
That's Reality When You Adle Me, Bitch, I'll Choke You With A Weave
And Leave Ya Eardrum Draped Across Ya White Tee's Sleeve
Believe, I Pump The Illness Through Ya Speakers Kid
I'm Teachin More About The Afterlife Then Preachers Did
That's My Teachers Bid, Argue The Point And Get Erased Bastard
I'm On A Pace Faster, Than Most MC Actors Jus Ta Get What The Fuck I'm After
I'm Known To Scope You Out With My Marksmenship
N When I Spit, I Leave MC's 'Choppin At The Bits'
They Dyin To Be As Lethal As Me, But There's Only One
You Could Copy My Whole CD, But You Will Get Sonned
N That's Honest, Cause Honestly, Can't No One Touch Me
Side Step When You Rush Me, One Diss'll Leave You Hushed G
Now You Lucky, Cause I Blessed Ya With Publicty, Thank Me
My Insides Are Killin Me, I'm Laughin Cause --
Even Without A Buzz My Skills Are Too Dope To Rank Me
I've Held Biters Captive, Left Many A Body Fractured
I'm Fuckin Absurd. . . Got This Game Runnin Faster Backwards
Formula, The Mother Fuckin Dopest. . N That's Word.

[Chorus]

Whooo. . Lethal Lyricist. . To All The Haters Who A Couple Years Ago Said I Won't Gone Make It. . Fuck Ya'll. . Look At Me Now. . Ya'll Bitches Can't Even Touch Me No More. . I'm Out Kids.

-Formula: Lethal Lyricist. . Anybody On My Level? :nono:

FormulaMC 12-04-03 11:54 PM

REPLIED TO:
MP~Phasiz @ Rule- Rise Of The Underground
Auspicious- Anatomy Of A Soldier
LoCo- One Grimey Nigga

Yeah, This Was One Of My Ego-Boostin Pieces. . But I Think There Are Some Dope N Quotable Lines In There. . Feedback Appreciated.

-Formula.

2-Rich 12-05-03 12:00 AM

That Was some ILL shit man i felt tha ENERGY nice drop flow and everything keep it up man OVERALL 9/10

Menik 12-05-03 02:34 AM

Yeah i agree with 2-Rich this was a good drop man...your structure was nice like usual lol....you elevated real nice man.....your vocab was nice in this i thought....flow was pretty good as well, stayed on point through out the whole thing i thought....Overall this was a good piece man, good drop...keep at it.

FormulaMC 12-05-03 03:56 PM

Up. . Ya'll Sleep On Me Too Much. . If This Was A Collab With LM or Even Camarac. . I'd Have Bout 20 Replies Right Now. . Serious.

-Formula.

Kredit 12-05-03 09:12 PM

^ No shit. . but I mean, no matter what site you're on, there is some sleep. . you gotta get past that.

About the piece now. .

Your flow has gotten a lot better man, I can tell you've been working on it. The content is on that boastful tip, and we all know that's my favorite. . lol. A few quotables sprayed here and there, my favorite was the Holy/Jesus Tip line. . quite dope. A few filler lines here and there, but they didn't really throw off the piece as a whole. Pretty good shit, but you got some catching up to do in the bragging department. :rolleyes:

Good shit my protege, just keep elevating.
Get at me on AIM for another cypher. .

FormulaMC 12-06-03 01:15 PM

^ ^ ^

What The Fuck? No Welcome Kid, I'm Formula. . My Account Screws Up Sometimes. .

-Formula.

ill Explicit 12-06-03 01:35 PM

comin straight at it with this one, alot of agression and some pretty hot lines mixed in there. topic was pretty random but overall the emotion of this piece overwhelmed that and it came out pretty solid -1

Wise Mynd 12-06-03 03:12 PM

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Originally posted by Masta C
Yeah i agree with 2-Rich this was a good drop man...your structure was nice like usual lol....you elevated real nice man.....your vocab was nice in this i thought....flow was pretty good as well, stayed on point through out the whole thing i thought....Overall this was a good piece man, good drop...keep at it.

i agree with everything Masta C said


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