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[- U aint a rapper ..Ft.Edicius -]
kmfrob - Drifter
Rule - Death In Our Eyes Feat. Kclipz 4 Murkin Infinite Skillz - Rememberin Us: Based on a true story -------------------------------------------------------------------- Fuck u , u cant stand me.. This is to all the kids, dreaming of a rap career = ) Edicius Ull like to be star fuck u ,picture this! u always stayin a faggot ass fan Dont try its useless like deaf peeps walking around with a fukkin walkman , .. Dreaming of makin it in this biz? haha like bush speaking the truth aint gonna happen.. ur future is set, in a dark smoking room at the back screaming& clappin ! Get a grip face reality damn u so blind? u think the net is gonna help u ? gettin a rapcareer lmao yea im a star my website has a slogan 'Illness defined..' Kids are funny these days like bash signed on 5 net sites and he just begon! droppes his mic's jerk of on his feedback, real life ?? None!..Oh ooh.. an ignorant, arrogant fuck , but still a herb calles everyone names, but theres a relief!.. This kid is in real life a butcher,lmao ..explains his continiously search for..beef! But serious ..this aint a joke, im tellin u what its like, ur eyebrows frown? u cant take the truth!, this aint a circus this is real! i aint no fukkin clown!.. Nah im jus playin , see now i'm doin it again, and bash dont take this personal.. dont get it twisted! dont jump of a fukkin roof.. u the one sayin 'its just the net' but deep down inside, ..ur cryin,i dont even need the proof! Oh i olmost forgot! u have a change! yall after readin this, dont get strange feelings in ur belly u can always start a career of spittin bullshit, combined with bling bling , just look at nelly!.. [hook] You Ain't A Rapper - Just A 2nd Class Citizen... Your Shit Plummets - Like The Wall In Berlin… You Aint a Rapper, Black Magic? You Just a Sin!.. Spittin’ Raps - Like Vanilla Ice Was Your Twin… Rhytmic Could Spit 1000 Lyrics, Dissing Each And Everyone Of You… Or I Could Just Rip The Shit Outta Herbs Like BabyBlue… Who Need To Pursue Intelligence To Spit A Insult… You Spat One Incoherent Battle - And Look At The Result… I’m Just Randomly Dissin’ People, Bringing Them Down… Like I was In Search of Killa Instinkz Supposed Lyrical Crown… But I’ll Settle On One Cat, Not So Renouned - Dope Wax… Dawg Listen To me, You Can’t Even Speak Truth With the Facts… You Gotta Speak Lies Like You was A Government Axe… Come On Dawg, You’d be Better Off PLayin The Sax… Like Ja I’m Spittin The Outdated Rhythm n’ Blues… I’m Rappin Fiercely Like I’m About To Blow A Fuse… It’s My Right To Confuse - I Could Become A Eminem Hater - N’ Step In Camarac’s Shoes, Too Big, Can’t Handle Your Views… But I’ma keep Following Every Path That I Choose - In my Rhymes… Motherfucker I’m Like FormulaMc I “Crucify My Lines”… Then I Shock People Like Daniel Surviving Being Fed To The Lions… But When People Are traumatized At me Spitting This Sick Shit… Just Look For Baron Gods Diss - When he Called C-section A Spick… [hook] You Ain't A Rapper - Just A 2nd Class Citizen... Your Shit Plummets - Like The Wall In Berlin… You Aint a Rapper, Black Magic? You Just a Sin!.. Spittin’ Raps - Like Vanilla Ice Was Your Twin… Damn theres still hope then..= ( |
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nice. breakdown:
Edicus-had trouble with the flow a little. but it was nice. i can tell that its a good one for audio maybe. but it was nice. sum lines were stretched tho. vocab came nice. nice topic and enjoyed the wordplay in it. tight if you ask me. 8/10 Hook-decent.l ast line was nice. first was ok. Rhytmic-nice overall verse. easy read and enjoyable. i didn't get some parts tho. like the mentioning of emcees and wutever. but if you exclude it then it was a well written verse. flowed nicely and the stayed out topic. props. 8.5/10 check my thread wen i post it up please. peACE |
Fucka structure :P its audio wise writtin = ) oh and the flow, ..its no struggle, ..some times its flowin from inside..lol, but still thnx..hit urs up..
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nice. breakdown:
Edicus-had trouble with the flow a little. but it was nice. i can tell that its a good one for audio maybe. but it was nice. sum lines were stretched tho. vocab came nice. nice topic and enjoyed the wordplay in it. tight if you ask me. 8/10 Hook-decent.l ast line was nice. first was ok. Rhytmic-nice overall verse. easy read and enjoyable. i didn't get some parts tho. like the mentioning of emcees and wutever. but if you exclude it then it was a well written verse. flowed nicely and the stayed out topic. props. 8.5/10 check my thread wen i post it up please. peACE ACE HIT IT PERFECT THERE YOU GUYS DO COMPLIMENT EACH OTHER BUT I THINK ED HAD MINOR PROBS ON HIS VERSE OTHER THEN THAT THIS WAS GOOD AND VERY CREATIVE |
:( Retires..:p..
Quik keys need to take mroe time write, ..i write to quik ..thnx up^ |
dont be discouraGED
i hold you and rhythmis to higher expectations because i see what your capable of by no means should you get discouraged you have a great talent both of you do i just know your capable of more this wasnt bad by any means though it was good. |
i liked... but i can see some lines are a bit stratched!
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I know, ..= ) ..thnx for that ..but still to many times i fuck up, ..and come half assed..need to stop that |
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Audio aint stretched!..the flow was on point so its not stretched..= ) |
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