Merry Christ Missed
 

Merry Christmas? fuck that.. another holiday on my shit list
But before you judge me, let me tell you why it is this ^^
everything is twisted.. the true meaning is non-existant
with all the greed & gifts.. Jesus has turned up missing
who gave us the rite to replace Christ w/ a tree & lights
& a fat guy in a red suit who uses reigndeer for flight
why is it alright, to believe in that ^^ but not in the truth
& only look up to the heavens when Santa is on the roof
who said it was ok to display this behavior to the youth
leaving them thinking the almighty is a bearded man in boots
Look.. don't think im a religious freak, thats not the case
i just hate that people forget why we have this holiday
Originally.. it was a way to celebrate the date of his birth
but somewhere along the way we played with its worth
it has been turned.. into a marketing plan targetting buyers
to purchase material items that make our wallets lighter
the entire economy is dudes in business suits w/ ties trying
to get a strangle hold on every cent by tieing our budgets tighter
but rather than struggle & fight em.. we go shopping
its been happening for so long & showing no signs of stopping
so fuck it ...go get your "Merry Christmas" on & popping
hopping from house to house to see how many presents you get
& never let HIS presence effect your ability to collect
then just forget to remember your believes & what you have faith in....

TEAR THE WRAPPING PAPER
& say "O MY GOD!!" when you think your GIFTS are amazing

Im Not Saying Im Better Than This...
I Love To Get Gifts Just Like The Rest Of You..
I Just Think We Need To Celebrate The Real Meaning More
Than The Materialistic Aspect Of Christmas...

Bah Humbug You Fucks!!!!

Good drop Scrooge lol. i enjoyed it a thought the meaning is one we all shud think about.

''Originally.. it was a way to celebrate the date of his birth
but somewhere along the way we played with its worth''
this stuck out for me, very true.

nice structure and wordplay.
keep doin ur thing.

I liked it man. good flow,vocab and to be honest a great topic.
i agree. im not religous but how the hell did we get from the bith of christ to fat ass red suited man the b and e's your house.lol.

nicely done

yo man i was feeling this piece good vocab and wordplay and topic like e lude said and i feel that way too dog the true meaning of Christmas is mistaken

it was a nice piece..followed the planned outline from the go n flowed well in most parts,i jus found myself driftin n having to pick the flow up again sumtimes but you redeamed it by vast amount of effort,storyline n vocab which made the piece very nice to read..

good overall piece=9/10

Uppin

tight drop man. im glad i read this. i have to agree on that
man. some people get too caught up into the materialistic
world. and im glad you admit that your not too different
from anyone else. takes a real man to admit it. i enjoyed the
meaning as well as the way it was written. the flow was great.
the way it was done was nice too. i could jus hear it. nicely
stated. much props. tight. keep spitting.
peace

ps. check out my thread if you have time
1 love, 1 God, 1 way...

nice drop that was tight

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thanks

Wow... Here we go again... I just had this discussion with Edicius..

I was feeling this shit ! On the real homie you got mad skills,keep that shit up.

Thanks

Nice drop, Evolve...

Great flow...

Good message.

Very similar to a piece I'm dropping today.

Ya coulda chilled on the anger some, but I guess if ya feeling it, flow with it.

Decent vocab, not much wordplay, if any.

Straight forward rant about what X-mas has become...

Cool.

8.25/10

yo
 

i been surfing this website 4 a while now an seen talent and seen wackness lol. but this was good, yo i aint got anyfin bad 2say bro accept your words writing and yo talent rising yo, this was off the hook

NIce drop-evolve.....

shyt wus hott,i feel what ur sayin but hey fucc it nuttin is better den free shyt!!..lol....feel me but ne way nice piece flow wus good,dat wus good topic u chose!........now ppl stop sleepin n give dis mad da feedbacc he deserves!!.......0n3