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keying nonsense
i've stepped out of my shadow, proclaim im ILL when i battle
isane lyricist leave your emcees shaking like baby rattles called me ILLness ways i spit nonsense and you feel this put up a fight with me,so i put my fist right were ur face is snipe ya chest from a distance and rip your vest go ahead spit ur best,i'll punch u so hard that ur soul will jump out of ya flesh clash you threw the ground like my fist weighted 1,000 pounds rock a krown ,ill snatch it and make you eat dirt out of the ground i'll rip threw ur corpses,well im creative called me methaphorses i key this nonsense that take over your mind by unknown forces blah 2 min key http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96808 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96816 |
uppin for some feed back
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i thought it was ok mang. desent flow and vocab. it painted a good picture.keep it up
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good shit for 2 min
good punches not too many metas good vocab keep that shit up. ......................................... |
ight thanks for the feed back uppin
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Yeah this was alright i thought.....you had some good metas in here i thought, pretty decent....structure was alright could have been a bit better but still good.....flow was good i thought, stayed on mostly, fell off a bit but nothing big...but overall this was alright keep at it.
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yup it was ok decent flow decent vocab decent overal hit up my sig with feed back |
ight thanks for all the feed back uppin once again
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Yea, it was straight. Topic kinda used up, but played well.
Nice meta's and a decent flow hommie, should have made it longer, I like those type of reads. But nice drop overall hommie. OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
ight thanks alot high class uppin for more feed back
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yo for two minutes that was a real nice verse right when i started reading it i felt it you know but that was real nice for two minutes can u hit my verse up called "underpriveledged"thanks man keep it up
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uppin
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