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Im mauling mics wit mechanical jaws\\
you couldnt show proof even if ya was made wit alcohal\\
fall away into my invention\
of lyricle intentions\
destined for interventions\\
my verbal vengence\
can destroy\ you and any one of ya henchmen\\
im blending\ mental endings\
that leave emcees full of brain muecus drenchings\\
lending\ and scaving \\
the first layer of skin off ya face\
im on pace\ to phase\ you wit out a trace\\
gaining spit grace\


yo yo
my verbal harmony\
will destroy you and everyone in ya army\\
splatering the brain matter by blowing pressure into ya
arterys\\
wit spit that blows out my mouth as fast as arrows from
archery\\
pardon me\ im obviously\
way beyond ya brain capasity\\
battle me\ and tragically\
ill flask you \wit LYRICS THAT SMACK YOU\
LIKE THE WIKS TO A CARPET ROTATING IN A VACUUM\\
THAN ILL ASK YOU\ IF ITS DEATH THAT INTENSE\\
UNDERSTANDING MY SPIT CAN BE CONSIDERED A SIXTH SENSE\\
YO MY METALITY\ IS EMCEE FATALITYS\\
TAKE THE PILL LIKE THE MATRIX AND STEP BACK INTO REALITY\\
ORDAINED TO MY FATE\TA DISIPATE\
WACK EMCEES THAT THINK THERE GREAT\\
HARDCOROUS THE DRAKE\
STUCK WIT A CURSE\ THATS WORSE\ THAN ANY EMCEES SICKEST VERSE\\

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HARDONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh man you got tha real shit

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This was ok....you need to work on your structure though cause your lines are short and long, you should really try to keep the lines around the same length so it is structured good....flow was ok...add multies to help it out...but keep at it.