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i'm`the`bitch Vs. mofo
yo lets do this
rules are the following: no hate votes no dr votes no crew votes 5 to 15 lines/bars i'll spit first |
Re: i'm`the`bitch Vs. mofo
[QUOTE]Originally posted by this_mofo_aint_playin
yo lets do this rules are the following: no hate votes no dr votes no crew votes 5 to 15 lines/bars i'll spit first [/QUOT how do i get a structure |
yo lets do this shit i'll put ur ass in that ditch/
rite about now i'm about to make u my bitch//-1 do you think you can compete with the mofo/ well bring it bitch and we'll see this fo show//-2 ur advatar is the one fuck milk and got pot/ thats what prob makin you c da fuckin dot//-3 grab ur flabby ass and fuck the hell out of it/ make you fuckin moan an make u eat carpit//-4 well mabye i aint got shit to fuckin say bout you/ and by the way thst was my shit an i'm through//-5 |
look at my rap and u'll see
oh yea i made a typo thst= that ok ppl........................................ .................................................. ........ |
come on bitch bring that shit i'm gonna woop your ass with a 1 ton bitch you think u got all say just wait till i kick your ass another day when i get done your not gonna be able to bend down and suck your dick cuz all your are is a big fat prick.
i have not much to say except why are you so fucking gay and thats all i have to say............................, ................................./ ............................, ................................// /=half a bar,//=end of bar |
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VOCABULARY - ... PUNCHLINES - ... STRUCTURE - this_mofo_aint_playin CREATIVITY - this_mofo_aint_playin PERSONALS - this_mofo_aint_playin MULTIES - this_mofo_ainy_playin FLOW - this_mofo_aint_playin OVERALL - this_mofo_aint_playin Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96557 |
yo thanx for da vote...........UPPIN(1)........................... ....................
come on ppl lets get this closed today........................ |
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Agree wit ya 200%, except for creativity, i didnt see much in der. Hit up my link and give an honest vote. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96491 |
this_mofo_aint_playin- structure, flow, personals, creativity,
n multis... this battle in my opinion wus fucking weak and whack..... no one had punches or nuthin anyway My VOte-this_mofo_aint_playin Peac3_____________--------------___________.................... |
drop an honets vote ont he battles in my sig.... Peac3__________--------------__________............................
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yo buggs vote on the pole man............................................... ..
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yo t-west get ur posts up then come poole vote on this ok man. thats what counts not just typin it in here..................
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UPPIN(2) COME ON PPL LETS GET THESE VOTES IN FOR THIS POLE AND LETS SEE WHATS GONNA GO DOWN BETWEEN THE BITCH AND MOFO
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UPPIN(3) come on guys and gals vote on this batlle already.
hit this up come on...............................plz.............. ............... |
Aiight dis battle was whacc!!.....nooo punch's sooo dis really isnt considered a battle.....but ill explaine my vote!!
Bkitch:ummm....i dont really have ne thing to say to u but dat u should elevate alot more b4 u battle dat wus horrible!!......try harder next time!! come on bitch bring that shit i'm gonna woop your ass with a 1 ton bitch you think u got all say just wait till i kick your ass another day when i get done your not gonna be able to bend down and suck your dick cuz all your are is a big fat prick. i have not much to say except why are you so fucking gay and thats all i have to say............................, ................................./ ............................, ................................// ^^ dat wus nuttin but an elementary rap soo elevate!! Now mofo:shyt wus weak basically no punch's or if those r they r not strong soo work on dat!!...but atleast un-like "bitch"......ur verse wus better structured,flowed better,soo overall u have da better verse!! Vote:mofo Reason:>>(Scroll up n look for ur self)<< there you go!!......~1~ |
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