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Relik(Rhyme Reapers)-v-Tonya~Montana(Lyrical Soldiers) <CREW BATTLE> (the new one)
ok so I didnt forget the poll this time!!!
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Maybe later we can get to a little... :hump:
Little girl she can throw big punches;but will repeat the same Hit, girl were not the Real World, please stop recycling what you spit, basically.... you couldn't ever be one of the top ten best femcees, Lady D has already proven that to you repetitively; consecutively, you just try to Get By with low Quality you are Too Late like Kweli, honestly for you to Beat me... I would become a King like Rodney, your bars are as uneven as your eyebrows, well; your face is ok, but hey; lets move onto your body now,ya didn't want to show it, none would dare approach it?your body odors are that ferocious? keep your legs closed,mouth shut,your like early morning halitosis. why else would you think your so unnoticed!!! |
by the way, on the 5th line, Get By and Too Late are talib kweli songs, an Quality is one of his albums, just to make sure u get the idea
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sorry 4 da delay
......................... like battlin a 'corpse' ya remains will be a "relic".... you won't last "one round" like gettin killed in russian roulette... yea i murda cats, then outline in chalk ya 'figure'... they'll find you in the 'basement' but not hangin wit 'tigger'... i commend you on less losses, "ct reppin 203"... goal is ten wins in a row, thank you for helpin me.. you hit with a few personals, like you work in "human Resources"... you should kill your "Ghostwriters' cause in ya verse i see "forces"... i'ma end ya wins at 12, being a rhyme reaper don't make you nice... ya career is already on the "rocks" i just served it wit "ice"... |
nice drop ma let the votings begin~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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alritght, this needs to be voted on and gotten over with
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ok kids
breakdown Relik Little girl she can throw big punches;but will repeat the same Hit, girl were not the Real World, please stop recycling what you spit, ^^no....bad opener basically.... you couldn't ever be one of the top ten best femcees, Lady D has already proven that to you repetitively; consecutively, ^^horrible...punch? you just try to Get By with low Quality you are Too Late like Kweli, honestly for you to Beat me... I would become a King like Rodney, ^^first line was nice....second blah your bars are as uneven as your eyebrows, well; your face is ok, but hey; lets move onto your body now,ya didn't want to show it, ^^flow poor....punch ok none would dare approach it?your body odors are that ferocious? keep your legs closed,mouth shut,your like early morning halitosis. why else would you think your so unnoticed!!! ^lol...decent finisher Tonya like battlin a 'corpse' ya remains will be a "relic".... you won't last "one round" like gettin killed in russian roulette... ^^nice try at a play off his name but....no!!!!!lol....plus flow was off yea i murda cats, then outline in chalk ya 'figure'... they'll find you in the 'basement' but not hangin wit 'tigger'... ^blah...bad i commend you on less losses, "ct reppin 203"... goal is ten wins in a row, thank you for helpin me.. ^^improving.... you hit with a few personals, like you work in "human Resources"... you should kill your "Ghostwriters' cause in ya verse i see "forces"... ^^good... i'ma end ya wins at 12, being a rhyme reaper don't make you nice... ya career is already on the "rocks" i just served it wit "ice"... ^^lmfao.....nice closer, won it for you Overall=Weak battle, I expected MUCH more from both...but Tonya had some nice punches...but both of ya work on ya flow. Vote=tonya |
good battle here........
lemme breakdown shit....... punches - tonya flow - relik metas - tonya vocab/complexity - tie personals/dissing - tie opener - tie closer tonya structure - relik overall - tonya...... hit this up honestly ppl........ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97258 |
iight yall...thanks for peepin this battle........
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thought id scope this battle out, i hate sleepers....
ok good battle from both sides, i went through it twice...i havent seen any of yall shit before its pretty good... Relik, i think you held a nice structure all the way through..but i also think it was hittin hard but didnt really stand out that much...i think thats where tonya come through on you... ya career is already on the "rocks" i just served it wit "ice"... thats ender from tonya dayum i thought that was really great...i saw some great punches in ya ryhmes and creativity which got through for the win on this... relik you came hard...i like ya style... nice battle props to both... vote=tonya can you plz drop a honest vote on my battle link below thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...81&pagenumber=1 |
opener:Relik
closer:Tie punches:Tonya structure:Relik vocab:Tie wordplay:Tie overall:Tonya tonya only just won this one, wit a harder punch or two, good battle, nice read, keep it up y'all aiight peace |
someone didnt poll??
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lol,youve seen one of my battles before lilem, i battled you before, i won i think 5-2 or somethin, back in the day, but word, i shud stick with topical, thats where i'm at, never liked these battles much, good battle tonya, bring it to IR if your missin a vote, much love ma
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yea nice one relik...also you the first guy i battle
that did'nt use the same ole tired lines bout suckin dick and hoe and bitch... well uppin for more honest votes... |
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