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Deranged Thoughts! (keystyle) Ft. Bash and Whitelightning
Bash (Talking): Shout out to the whole D.O.I Family...Yeah!!!!
Bash: My Brain Intellegence cause a Massive Destruction spitting out The Persistance Toxic that will Dominate This Generation Whitelightning: Sensations, Hearts Racin and Pacin It's Like Pacs Reborn, Thorn In Ya Minds, Like Some Sporadic Coke Addict Producin Static Bash: Can Only Rely On Myself, This Armory Of Harmony Stalls Lyrical-Pharmacies. Whitelightning: Like The Virgin Olsen Twins, Hit Em Harder Than Kobe's Hotel Services, Nail Em Faster Than Merry Go Round Spins Bash: Microphone Incitement Releases Deranged Thoughts.. That Increases Knowledge Of Beats When You Get Shot.. Whitelightning: It's Magic When I Spit And People Hear Dis Incredible Shit, It's Quick To The Point, Make You Bitches Take Your Seats Bash: Can't Be Defeat..I Rip Hearts Wit Ease..Split Your Neck and Let It Bleed Like A Virgins Clit All My Sequels Are Classic Whitelightning: Actions Drastic, Yall Faker Than Britney's Plastic Breasts, Take A Breath Bitch Cause The Lead In Your Chest Will Make You Collapse, While I Still Be Lyrikally Relapsin Bash: Relapsin Guns Blastin...The Frozen Thrones BeTa Impression...Prospects Gets Neglect While I Disect Your Faction..Soul Redeems DeFect Your While Legislation Whitelightning: See There's Just Some Realistic Issues, Some Whack Bitches Roamin Around, They Ain't Black, They Got Losses On Stack They Just Don't Know How To Get On Track Bash: GeT Off Track...Cause ya all Underrate My Rap State...NecKs Get Break...This Time I'm Arm And I aint Taking no Disrespect Conceited Life Of Dishonesty, But Honestly, Deceiving Is Harming-Me Whitelightning: But We Seem To Harming He Givin Him Depressional Blues, We Got All The Moves, Deafining Sound Of Silent Hooves, Prove How We Got Proof Who's Iller Than You Bash: The Core Of These Ways, Turns From Missions Into-A Conception Maze Who Can You Trust? Mouths Bust Of Secretive Stuff, Friends Distrust Whitelightning: But It's A Must Nowadays To Bash Gays And Antyhing Queer, It's Crackin 5th Gear To Hear The Latest Rumour, Create Humour Tweeks Watchin Every Bitch Spread To Speak Words To Eat Bash: Ya All Want Beef??Well I'll be The First One To Serve It..Your Punch I'll Swerve It...Your Neck I'll Break It....Your Skull I'll Crack It.... Whitelightning: Smack Ya Back Up To Retract Constant Sad Shit Ya Spewin, You Creatin Hatred Issues But Who's To Be Debatin, It's Ain't Over Ya Lyrics, It's Over The Whackness Virus Ya Spread Faster Den HIV Bash: H.I.V....Like Stevie Ya all Wonder Why You Can't See Me...Erupts Of Blood I-Corrupt, Society Lying-To-Me Disrupt Of Loyalty Once Abrupt...I'm Like a Volcanoe When I Erupt.. Whitelightning: Steppin Up To Challenges That Don't Mean Much, To Show You Who's Got The Doper Touch And Lyrikal Such, You Truly Ain't Much Bash: Repping D.O.I Even If I'm Ban Or Online I'll Still be R.B's Top Five..Switch Sides, These Traitors Steady-Described, Of Being Devilishly Thrived..Keep Enemies Closer Then Friends They More Loyal At The End, Friends Restrain Vibes Whitelightning: But They Keep Ya Alive, Watchin Over Ya Preventin Nosedives, When I Started The D.O.I, People Were Gunna Bitch O Me O MY, It's Time To Die, And I Ain't Even Lived a Lie Bash: And That's Word...My MeTaphors Are Absurb...Authenticy Combined Wit Anthology Metaphorically You Aint Nuthin Like N.O.R.E.....Murder Emcees VerbaLLy It's Over Dogg!!!!! D.O.I For Life |
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i reckon this was dope the way yall did this, different sort of collab that was really good,
Had good vocab Good flow would sound real good as an audio, yAL should keep ya ocllab style like this cause its really good Pcee |
yeah this was something different, i liked it though.....both of you came nice i thought....both had real good vocab....flow was good in it, stayed on point through out it, fell off a bit but nothing big...but this was a good collab i thought, enjoyed the read...keep at it.
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this is original...its a first ive seen and i liked it
wordplay was dope structure was good... and oyu had some creativity in there overall this is a 8 and a half out of 10 keep dropping |
Nice bar for bar Collab!!.....dey usually end up hott,n dis piece wus good but i feel i shoulda been done better!!...but still nice job on dis,Flow wus good den got a lil choppy but still on point!!(good shyt)......n wordplay wus aiight elevate on dat tho!!...well what more can i say overall Nice work but come harder next time!!.....aiight......~1~
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Straight To the Top!!!!!!!!
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think the way you did it suited ya styles of writin, i think reading it as a verse through the flow fell a bit, but think when done by two, ya could get round it.. so well suited......vocab was tight and like masta said different,, makes a change,,,,,good read..enjoyed it....pZ
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i liked the technique
did it rhyme the whole way, i noticed it started to exc. vocab and the topic was all over the place but it went good keep postin yall.............................................. |
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Thanks...This was a MSN collab....It was keystyled so dont expect everything to be perfect... |
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WERD. This collab was hot to death. Very unique. Keep spittin that hot shit fam. DOI
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Thanks Withersman.....Upping
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