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Phoeniix vs. Meters
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you act tough but you 'never was', u aint even a has-been
hows it feel to have a newb crunch you like the captain* ya lips flappin, your rappin's so stagnant i crack ya wack stanzas like an egg wit a plastic mallot you got no talent, losin to a newb wit no wisdom im not like the other new dudes that u took all of your wins from** your shits dumb, vocab maskin ya wackness caught u like an arachnid, makin ya last act tragic quit laughin, cuz im catchin 5 votes like jurassic im takin measures drastic to blast this herb fagget dumbass had it, drowned cuz he ducked too far under seperatin ya bars cuz they embarassed of eachother*** n00b1 and n00b2 posted in bitchslapped, so u embraced this u only won cuz u sabotaged their verses, before you copy and pasted**** am i dyslexic? or are you always under brothers' covers?***** the way im runnin Meters, its like im a marathon runner. may need some explanation..... *captain crunch. **meters only beats whack newbs. (i swear, check it!) ***he seperates his verses by every 2 lines (usually, i dont know if hes gonna do it here) ****these cats posted in bitchslapped so he posted their verses for him, im sayin he edited their verses so they suck so he could win *****the movie...under cover brother..dyslexic ppl mix up sentences..meters is under brothers' covers, suckin dick....get it. fuck i hate doing that--its so lame, why cant ppl just understand everything? |
Here comes illiterate flamer bird Phoeniix, two eyes(i’s) blazing/
Used to be a cyclops but added an eye for male gazing/ It’s amazing that in appraising ya worth I found hell on earth/ Reading ya rhymes is like a perpetual state of Shaq’s vaginal birth/ Doesn’t reading that hurt?, well pussy, I just ripped you harder/ Keeping n00bs outta RB.com’s my cause, an’ I just made you it’s martyr/ Even ya choice of ghostwriter is bad, kid doesn’t have that much savvy/ but fuck that, you’re the ghost, ya don’t even have the presence of your avy/ My lyric is spit so cold that it encased ya in a wall of icicle spears/ Firebird changed the mold in that all that was flaming were his tears/ As a kid you experienced jeers, lack of peers was why ya buried yourself in mythology/ Bitch should of realized that to rise the Phoenix dies, should have invested your time in theology/ But bitch, it’s not blasphemy to say that even god can’t save you from this merking/ Just be glad that God’s a comedian, and your downfall is the reason he’s smirking/ Phoeniix was looking a little TENSE, so I shredded ‘em with my CLAUSE/ Phoeniix is so fucking inept in English, has to cover his dictionary in gause/ |
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punches-Phoeniix personals-Phoeniix meta's-Phoeniix multies-meters flow-meters finisher-Phoeniix Phoeniix i understood every line you said so dont worry some people do understand.. overall i think that Phoeniix won this battle due to better punches and personal vocab was ok by both but other wise Phoeniix wins my vote.. also better complexity by Phoeniix .. meters you did ok but not good enough to beat Phoeniix .no hate.. just a vote Bye |
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opener-meters closer-meters (damn!!!) punches-meters personals-pheonix entertainment-meters vote---> METERS now, can you please vote on my battle vs 007 ~peace~ |
Pheoniix won this battle cause his shit was 10x's better. meters had some good lines but just wasn't interesting
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Phoenix won dis
flow-phoenix opener-meters closer-phoenix punches-meters personals-pheonix entertainment-phoenix So for those reasons... vote- phoenix Hit me up wit an honest vote der plz. thx. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96491 |
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Can't poll vote but this ups your thread: My vote goes to pheonix
Both were entertaining for as metas and punches. The difference to me is the complexity of the verse that pheonix displayed. More than just the same pattern of flow and rhyme scheme. |
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Da Breakdown.... Meters:Shyt wus nice,flow wus good,vocab wus good,etc...Punch's were there but not hittin dat good he kinda ate dem!!....but overall nice verse good job! Quote:Here comes illiterate flamer bird Phoeniix, two eyes(i’s) blazing/ Used to be a cyclops but added an eye for male gazing/ It’s amazing that in appraising ya worth I found hell on earth/ Reading ya rhymes is like a perpetual state of Shaq’s vaginal birth/ Doesn’t reading that hurt?, well pussy, I just ripped you harder/ Keeping n00bs outta RB.com’s my cause, an’ I just made you it’s martyr/ Even ya choice of ghostwriter is bad, kid doesn’t have that much savvy/ but fuck that, you’re the ghost, ya don’t even have the presence of your avy/ My lyric is spit so cold that it encased ya in a wall of icicle spears/ Firebird changed the mold in that all that was flaming were his tears/ As a kid you experienced jeers, lack of peers was why ya buried yourself in mythology/ Bitch should of realized that to rise the Phoenix dies, should have invested your time in theology/ But bitch, it’s not blasphemy to say that even god can’t save you from this merking/ Just be glad that God’s a comedian, and your downfall is the reason he’s smirking/ Phoeniix was looking a little TENSE, so I shredded ‘em with my CLAUSE/ Phoeniix is so fucking inept in English, has to cover his dictionary in gause/ __________________ Punch's-7/10 Multi's-6/10 Meta's-6/10 Wordplay-7/10 Structure-7/10 Overall-33-50 Ok Now....... Phoenix:hot verse flow wus nice,structure wus nice,wordplay wus nice,..etc.......Punch's good sum personals like dat hot shyt keep it up!! Quote:you act tough but you 'never was', u aint even a has-been hows it feel to have a newb crunch you like the captain* ya lips flappin, your rappin's so stagnant i crack ya wack stanzas like an egg wit a plastic mallot you got no talent, losin to a newb wit no wisdom im not like the other new dudes that u took all of your wins from** your shits dumb, vocab maskin ya wackness caught u like an arachnid, makin ya last act tragic quit laughin, cuz im catchin 5 votes like jurassic im takin measures drastic to blast this herb fagget dumbass had it, drowned cuz he ducked too far under seperatin ya bars cuz they embarassed of eachother*** n00b1 and n00b2 posted in bitchslapped, so u embraced this u only won cuz u sabotaged their verses, before you copy and pasted**** am i dyslexic? or are you always under brothers' covers?***** the way im runnin Meters, its like im a marathon runner. Punch's-8/10 Meta's-8/10 Multi's-7/10 Wordplay-7/10 Structure-8/10 Overall-38/50 Vote:Phoenix reason:dis wus a good battle pretty close but Phoenix gets da upper hand!!.....i feel his verse wus stronger!! ON3 |
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WTF? ^This idiot needs to be banned for stupidity! Ok back on topic. Pheoniix your lines seemed forced. You had some personnels and multis but I was not feeling this drop. I thought you had this won, until I read Meters drop. Keep elevating and add a level of complexity to your verses. No need for explanation, we do understand meta's here... Meter although your lines were strechted a bit, (I do the same thing) you came hard. Multi's, meta's and word play all pressent. The complexity of your verse by far stood out in my mind. This is what I contribute to your win in my mind. Keep elevating and work on tighting up those lines. Great job. Props to both emcess, but there is only one winner in any battle. My Vote=meter for reasons explain above... |
feelin the same as bouncedoggydog to be honest....save me typing....
'Pheoniix your lines seemed forced. You had some personnels and multis but I was not feeling this drop. I thought you had this won, until I read Meters drop. Keep elevating and add a level of complexity to your verses. No need for explanation, we do understand meta's here... Meter although your lines were strechted a bit, (I do the same thing) you came hard. Multi's, meta's and word play all pressent. The complexity of your verse by far stood out in my mind. This is what I contribute to your win in my mind. Keep elevating and work on tighting up those lines. Great job.' my vote = meter hit this up for me, only need 1 more for the 5-0...wana close it now! thanks laters |
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