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dw vs feeble minded
10 lines max
all rules spit wen ready, check in dawg! |
feeble minded u jus reminded me of how wack mods can be...
cudnt step to me in a three~legged race... ur leg met wiv me n u still cudnt invade my space... we cross references but u bein crucified like jesus... extra meaness n death sentences means ya only head...is on ya penis... thinkin u the shit wiv 2000+ posts...no losses wot u boast... fuck that... u got a new profile wen u weren't a MOD many left u as toast... roast in the oven..shrivel under my heat.. u try to make me burn but theres always blood~in~this~meat... beat n bullied bringin you dajarvu of old-school n bein de-moralized... equalized by snappin ya spine n ya ribs so ur parrellel to paralized...1 uppin ur verse! |
time to get skills. . well, im waiting, u swell with hatred
& talking about being elite?. . u dont even belong in elevated text wise your still a newb, every battle u fumble through . . shows your screenname is the only way u'll get D W a sad truth, he's got high hopes to be a text king & he beats me easily. . when a fairy tale is the setting Ive always owned you. . . height wise u cant test my flight i leave your face in more colors than florescent lights im not even trying, your overjoyed with false thoughts and to us your test is more distasteful than salt carts |
ha...good battle....dw had some good punches and nice metas....but feeble came back with harder punches....and some funny personals....here's what got it...
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BREAKDOWN Multis - dw (he had a few) Vocab - dw RhymeScheme - Feeble Structure - Feeble Flow - Tie Metas - dw Wordplay - dw Punches - Feeble Personals - Feeble (would be a tie...but Feeble's hit harder) Creativity - Feeble Complexity - Tie (dw line from feeble kept this a tie) Overall - Feeble got this with just harder and more creative punches.....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote..... peace 4:20 |
opener - feeble...Dw that was wack
closer - feeble punches - feebs lol at the W line personals - both verses were really indirect wordplay - dw...just cuz you havent won any categories yet vocab - meh at both overal - feebs hey feebs check the application forum dog:) peace |
Multis - not much really...but dw
RhymeScheme - Feeble Structure - Feeble Flow - both Metas - dw Punches - Feeble Personals - Feeble closing - feeble my vote - feeble |
uppin, yo. . lets get some honest votes up in here, up in here. now! or kill yourselves for sucking at life. .
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Opening: Feeb
Punches: Feeb Personals: Feeb Vocab: dw Structure: Feeb Flow: Feeb Closer: feeb Overall: feeb |
Multis - dw
opener - Feeble Structure - Feeble Flow - tie Metas - dw Punches - Feeble Personals - Feeble finisher - feeble overall - feeble pretty good battle but feeble takes it... Thank You.Bye |
Multies - Feeble
Wordplay - N/A Flow - Feeble Punchlines - Feeble Enjoyment - Feeble Feeble won this battle by everything, DW had a nice verse jus didnt hit him hard enuff.. Vote - Feeble |
alrite fair votes.....uppin this!
feeble can ya check ya pm's dawg......thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! |
This isn't even close..
Wordplay: Feeble Multis: Feebs Punches: Feebs Flow: Feebs Verdict: Feebs Feebs killed...dw your whack. Peace |
hehe thanks for votin yall.....surrised no one left links. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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