nuclear concepts: OVERZEALOUS LYRICIST
 

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m.c.uski
deva
kastaway


the words become weapons-the writer becomes the typest-
the weapons create the legend-the legend becomes the tighest.
if im not the nicest.....
my words will still irradicate the weak.. wack m.c.'s scurried-
making your tittle of underground stand for being dead and burried.
lyrics disburst with incripted codes before their exposed-
download scripted as verbs taking action ripping assholes.
injest the winds from a moving tornado before i spit flows-
a metaphor recreate noahs arch with traces of led in my h20.
specielize in splitting a ticks eyes with spits from 8oo feet-
in 7 days i can expose 95 percent of the wanna b's is week,(weak)
thoughts leak like classified files to foregin terrorist...my bars-
used as viruses with no antibodie in times of war.
each line is a flatline on a heart monitor graph-
which means one verse kills 10 minimum within 2 pragraphs.
measuring 104 on a thermometer-hurricanes on barometers-
my brain waves surpass yours even in miles to kilometers.
mathimatically i beat rappers when i diss em-
no man eqautes to my lyrical state i'll kill in metric systems.
subtract your rap from you content of crap when you spit-
add that to the facts and conclude you equate to human inscrimints.
its either on accident or perposely intent-
but when your fans say you the shit its literally ment.
want to battle CENTZ better pray i die before i react-
cause when i start your imaginary friends and gods angels wont have your back.
no cat can match my stretegic attack-
thats like finding an anemics that can prove they fat.
the improbability carries no posibility-
da impacts of a tracks abilities leaves neacks cracked and collecting dissability.
why nuclear concept?act you dont know-
but when we blow we displacing the globe.
firing a barrouge on your onterouge loogies firing in matrix mode.
why do insist to persist on shitting cause i view the world as a toilet bowl.

good shit man

nice flow, vocab , and struct

you had some good wordplay and metas too

good ooverall, keep on postin up man

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tight verse...well executed.....flow just deleloped all the way through, specially in the middle...yeah nice shit..pZ man

very well writtin you killed this....you had as lot of good wordplay your opener was great, very well done, i liked your structure and thoughts on this keep it up pz

YO WORD THIS SHIT WAS HOT, THE FLOW, VOCAB, MULTIS, WERE ALL THERE.
THIS IS JUST THE KIND OF WORK IVE COME TO EXPECT FROM YOU. FIRE MY NIGGA, FIRE.
A 9.5/10

PS- PM ME IF YOU WANNA DO ANY MORE COLLABS. PEACE

FORGIVE MY ABSENCE I FINALLY GOT TIME OFF SO I WAS TRYING TO DO MY THING BUT IM BACK AND IM READY TO KEEP THIS THING CYCLING.

i didnt catch the flow in this at all.

vocab was nice, topic was ehh .. done alot before.

the flow really threw me off though ..

i dont know why cats are mentioning multi's .. i seen 1 or 2 i think ..

the best part of this entire piece were the opening two lines .. nice scheme you used ...

just try to elevate on a few things, keep writing man

stay up
pz..1

the flow was easy to catch pop multis i dont use but i am deep with metas and subject being done...there was no subject to this what are you speaking of?
thanks for the input i will try to upgrade in the future.

This was straight, maybe taken a little over board with the compliments. I have seen better from you hommie. Dont get me wrong though, it is a good drop hommie. I was like the meta's, that was on point. Your vocab was straight, and rhyme scheme the same. This was a good drop hommie, just not your best...
( and theres no subject, dont know where he got that from )

7.5-8.0 / 10

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

YO HIT UP THIS LINK, THX.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97921

i did

Not bad...Not bad atall. Good flow from the start to finish. Are you a writer then a battler then? Keep it up. Rating: 7/10

Peace

pretty good dawg,i'm back man whoo,been busy an shit but,tha usual vocab and wordplay here,descent topic,afew nice bars,good stuff.

Peace

west where the fuck you been we got rhythmic in nuclear concept if you like we would love to hit a collab with you 2 you guys always shined so well togeather

No problem let's get this up,Pm me with details or sumin dawg.

Peace