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eMiNeM MiNis 12-08-03 08:28 PM

MP~PHASIZ vs eMiNeM MiNis
 
aight yo no min/max....no dickridin or hate votes....15 min to spit afta check in........................................1....... ........................................

eMiNeM MiNis 12-08-03 08:29 PM

checkin in................................................ .................................................. ................................

eMiNeM MiNis 12-08-03 08:38 PM

aight::::

i dunno wut this boy thinks hes doin goin up gainst me in this battle
but wen hes goin up gainst me hes gon get his nuts crushed like ridin on a horse wit no saddle
in his rhyme he prolly gon talk bout pullin out his chrome
bitch say that shit on me and ill send ur ass home
damn now u can tell u dont wanna front wit me
i should start a business for youngnz like u...pay the fee
go ahead im done tellin u how its done
enough hints for the young boy go ahead n spit 1

MP~PHASIZ 12-08-03 11:36 PM

-Damn...I aint even gonna waste my thoughts on this battle. HAHA!

Like a highway accident...this battle will be carnage
I'ma eat eMiNeM MiNis...oh ya, I don't like garbage*
This guy is carrying a bat...he must be Mark McGuire**
Than follow in his steps...and from this game retire***
Your win's resemble your skill...still none available****
Got his verse appraised...its worth was unvaluable
Who the fuck am I battling?...this guy's not a real MC
Take a look at his profile...his birthday was left empty*****
On November of 2003...whackness arrived one night******
Put his rhymes in a telescope...wouldn't be outta sight
Boy is an annoyance...I placed him on my ignore list
Someone ban his ass...cuz dope and wack can't coexist

*m&m minis; the candy
**sig says he'll "Beat you down with a bat"
***Mark McGuire retired from baseball
****his wins are 0
*****he didn't fill out his b-day in his profile
******Nov 2003 is when he joined

-This was done real quick, should do the trick though.

FlowzLuCiouS 12-08-03 11:46 PM

Aiight....

Da Breakdown......

eminem:shyt wus weak straight elementary wit it!!....flow wus really da only thing good!!,.......Punch's were weak buttin wus hittin soo overall weak verse!!

i dunno wut this boy thinks hes doin goin up gainst me in this battle
but wen hes goin up gainst me hes gon get his nuts crushed like ridin on a horse wit no saddle
in his rhyme he prolly gon talk bout pullin out his chrome
bitch say that shit on me and ill send ur ass home
damn now u can tell u dont wanna front wit me
i should start a business for youngnz like u...pay the fee
go ahead im done tellin u how its done
enough hints for the young boy go ahead n spit 1

^^ straight weak!!

Ok Now

MP:shyt was weak too but i think there might of been 1 punchline dat helped u get my vote!!................

Your win's resemble your skill...still none available****
Got his verse appraised...its worth was unvaluable

^^ nice punch!!....dat basically did it!!....flow wus good.....etc,...Overall da verse was alright do better next time!!

Vote:MP

Reason:He actually had punchlines!!

Weak Battle to vote on!!

ON3

Meters 12-08-03 11:47 PM

Ahhh....well. Shit man. I proclaim this a merking.
....so...think of a category...
and give it to Phastz. And that'd be accurate. If you want to see an example.

Flow-Phastz
Complexity- Phastz
Personals/Punches/Phastz

No hate, just a very clear vote.

MP~PHASIZ 12-08-03 11:55 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by FlowzLuCiouS
Aiight....

Da Breakdown......

eminem:shyt wus weak straight elementary wit it!!....flow wus really da only thing good!!,.......Punch's were weak buttin wus hittin soo overall weak verse!!

i dunno wut this boy thinks hes doin goin up gainst me in this battle
but wen hes goin up gainst me hes gon get his nuts crushed like ridin on a horse wit no saddle
in his rhyme he prolly gon talk bout pullin out his chrome
bitch say that shit on me and ill send ur ass home
damn now u can tell u dont wanna front wit me
i should start a business for youngnz like u...pay the fee
go ahead im done tellin u how its done
enough hints for the young boy go ahead n spit 1

^^ straight weak!!

Ok Now

MP:shyt was weak too but i think there might of been 1 punchline dat helped u get my vote!!................

Your win's resemble your skill...still none available****
Got his verse appraised...its worth was unvaluable

^^ nice punch!!....dat basically did it!!....flow wus good.....etc,...Overall da verse was alright do better next time!!

Vote:MP

Reason:He actually had punchlines!!

Weak Battle to vote on!!

ON3


As you may of noticed i said this was done real quick. After seeing his verse I knew how hard I had to come. So why would I use really creative shit on a battle such as this...think about it.

-WiLL GeTCha- 12-09-03 12:14 AM

Personals- MP
Punches-MP
Multies- MP
Flow- MP
Vocab- MP
Wordplay- MP
Overall- MP

Synapsis- Very Lopsided... MP took all categories wit Ease... I believe Minis needs to re-word alot of his punches cause he could flipped that Horse Saddle Punch better and use more creativity... PZ

_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ 12-09-03 12:59 AM

MP got this he had a better overall verse, punches, flow, and personals. Eminem shit was weak nothing hit hard the disses were bad. MP's flow could use work but he took the punches and personals here and the win.

MP~PHASIZ 12-09-03 08:59 AM

Thanks for the votes....

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Dayak Din 12-09-03 09:17 AM

Quote:
i dunno wut this boy thinks hes doin goin up gainst me in this battle
but wen hes goin up gainst me hes gon get his nuts crushed like ridin on a horse wit no saddle
in his rhyme he prolly gon talk bout pullin out his chrome
bitch say that shit on me and ill send ur ass home
damn now u can tell u dont wanna front wit me
i should start a business for youngnz like u...pay the fee
go ahead im done tellin u how its done
enough hints for the young boy go ahead n spit 1

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-->FreeBasE<-- 12-09-03 09:36 AM

yo MP got this so easily

better flow, vocab, metas and wordplay

MMminis gotta step up quick

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Rap~Man 12-09-03 09:52 AM

vote=MP

reason better flow, punches, strucute, personals, multies, meta's.
might as well say this gonna be a kncock out.

Rap~Man 12-09-03 09:53 AM

yo supose to be knock not kncock lol i made a typo so i though that i'd change it lol ................................................

MP~PHASIZ 12-09-03 09:56 AM

Thanks...
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