Corrupted Visions: When I'm Gone {Ft. Masta C}
 

There Comes A Time When A Man's Perspective, A Man's Outlook, A Man's Feelings. . Change About A Certain Subject Or Situation. In The End, You Must Put Down The Things Love. . In Order To Bring In The Things Neglected Via Indulgance, Greed, And Work Back Into Focus. .

Formula
I'm Writing My Self Off Today, Hey, Bye I'm Gone
Mourn After This Song, Rap Along - Cause I'm Finished
Been Up In It, Grindin For Too Long - I'm Bowing Out
Fouling Out, 6 Times Plat, Remember What I'm About
Raised In The South, Hard Working Parents, Barely A Family
Despite Early Hood Tragedies, My Pen Dipicted Everything
I Turned Pain To Words, My Name Hit Curbs In Ciphers
Had Birds A Triflin', Lotsa Bitin - But I Stayed Unbreakable
Went To Harlem, Was Unshakeable - Take A Few Breaths
Cherish These Blue Steps, I'm Melancholy, But Stress
Forced Me To Hang Up My Boots, Softly I Say Goodbye
With A Tear In My Eye, Fans'll Cry, No One Will Touch Um Like I -
Did, My Kids Tried To Stay Strong, But They Saw Daddy Down
Saw Daddy Frown, As Badly Sounds Came Out My Mouth, How?
Did I Let This Game Dictate, Situate My Life, Proud?
Maybe Since I Spoke The Truth N Smoked The Booths, Wow
I Proclaim That Everyone Knows Formula's Name, Now
I'm Out For Good, Thank You, I Leave Without Any Doubts. .

Hook
So It Shall Come To Pass, At last, I'm Gone
Remember Me Through Songs, Cause Now I'm Gone
Now I'm On, A Different Steez, It's All About My Babies
Game Drove Me Crazy Maybe But These Words Saved Me

Masta C
Mark my words till it starts to hurt that im leaving the game..
No more seeing my name please don't be grieving the shame…
Cause Im relieving my claims cause I just cant keep up..
I know I made some deep cuts but I just always creep shut..
Don't weep but you gotta understand it was my decision..
No derision, try to envision nothing with no provisions..
Everything is in a collision I just cant keep things straight..
My swings great but my stings late..i was a king..wait..
You can ring fate but I thought id do this till the day I die…
But I played a lie..Cause right now…I say good bye..

Formula
Hood Lie? No, It Molded Me, Told To Me- Be What I Was
See What I Does, I Created The Buzz, Now It's Cya Cuz
I Gotta Leave, Can't Mislead You Like I'ma Stay Another Day
Cause Mother Say It's Time To Play, No More Work Okay?
Mom's Right, I Gotta Spend Time With My Children
Dine With My Women - No More Rhymes To Be Spoken
Eraser To The Lines I've Wrote N - I Gotta Kill My Smokin
I Don't This Game To Maintain A Happy Life - Cause Tonight
I Recite I Love You To My Wife N Put Family In My Eyesight
Even Though Mines Was Tight - I Gotta Resist This
Move Rap To A Distance, One Positive I Must Dismiss. .
Is From My First Drop To Last My Ass Was Persistant
I've Brought Upliftment, 'Rapped' Like I Was 'Gifted'
Put Smiles On Faces, Shit, I Was Fuckin Significant
But Now, Ya Will Mourn After This Song, Rap Along
I'm Writing Myself Off Today, Hey, Bye, I'm Gone. .

Hook
So It Shall Come To Pass, At last, I'm Gone
Remember Me Through Songs, Cause Now I'm Gone
Now I'm On, A Different Steez, It's All About My Babies
Game Drove Me Crazy Maybe But These Words Saved Me

REPLIED TO:
Prophix Ft. Darkside- Innocent Bystander
Lyricalmami- Oh Shit Mami's Back
Gene Pool- Slower Days


Yea, This Was Written From The "Leaving The Rap Game" Perspective. Hope Ya'll Like It.

-Formula.

Yeah If You Check This Piece Out Leave Us Some Feedback On It, Its Much Appreciated, Thanks

Sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeit.. This was dope as hell on both sides.. Both verses had a good flow.. Lines that stood out to me were..

Formula - Even Though Mines Was Tight - I Gotta Resist This
Move Rap To A Distance, One Positive I Must Dismiss. .
Is From My First Drop To Last My Ass Was Persistant

Masta C - My swings great but my stings late..i was a king..wait..
You can ring fate but I thought id do this till the day I die…
But I played a lie..Cause right now…I say good bye..
^^ Loved the flow !

Yo this was one hell of a collab....Fomula Did well TO start it off..with Nice structure Flow,Multis through out it..masta C Did Well to follow with his verse he had good flow structure Mulits...Great work By Both of ya..Fomula came good in his second verse same as the first With the the multis, structure, and Flow was exellent..Gonna Miss Ya work Fomula I Liked to read Ya Work You Had That Hella Good SKill That Made me wanna read More......Peace to ya Fomula (v)

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Word Up Uski, I Ain't No You Felt My Work Like That. . But Yeah, This Piece Is Real For Me (Besides The Children Part. . I Kinda Set That Part In The Future) I'ma Quit Postin Here And Get To Workin On A Mixtape With My Boy Then My CD. I'll Be Postin Audios Here Maybe. Big Ups To Everyone Who Read My Tracks And Collabs Tho. It's Greatly Appreciated.

-Formula.

Yo Formula that shit was so hot damn.. I just read it and was like damn this kids got skill really glad you dropped 2 verses.. even though structure wasnt like the regular kind it still flowed like a mother fucker..

Masta C what can I say you weren't to far behind formula.. you came pretty good I liked how you guys focuesed on flow.. shit was dope

Dope collab..

Word Up, Thanks Speek. . Uppin This.

-Formula.

i gotta say i thought masta had the stronger verse despite only having the one, dont get me wrong they were all good, he jus has a better grasp at it, but formula i think its getting much better..still need to work on them multis but on the whole nice collab...keep reppin ...pZ..

That was dope nice collab stayed on topic i liked forumla's verse the most but i liked Masta's 2

peace.

Good shit dropped here.
Collab worked real well.
Formula's verse did come out better.
Master C's was good too.
Felt tha whole thing though.
Ill shit.
9.5/10.
Keep em coming.

Hey Thanks For The Feedback So Far, Keep The Feedback Coming In, Its Much Appreciated, Thanks.

Formula, shut up, you know you're still going to post here, lol.

Good collab from what I read of it (about half). . i'll read the rest later.

Hey Thanks For The Feedback So Far, Keep The Feedback Coming In, Its Much Appreciated, Thanks.