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DAVID vs GOLIATH
REPLIED ON THESE FOLLOWIN THREADS. CHECK OUT NOK'D ESPECIALLY. FEELIN THEM ALL.
METHODZ: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3234#post973234 MASTA C: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3236#post973236 NOK’D VIZION: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=GAZANOVA DAVID vs GOLIATH VERSE ONE IVE BEEN BEEFIN ON THE NET RECENTLY BUT THIS RAPS CUMIN FROM THE HEART/ IM GONNA TELL IT HOW LIFE IS ROUND MANCHESTER TO THE END FROM THE START/ IM WRITIN THIS IN COLLEGE WHILE GETTING SCHOLARS AND GETTING PAID/ MEANWHILE ONE OF MY OLD BOYS IS GETTING CONCLUDED WITH A BLADE/ HE GOT STABBED IN THE HEART FOR NOT PAYIN FOR £10 TICK ON SKUNK/ SO THE DEALER DECIDED THAT WAS A GOOD REASON TO KILL – WOT A PUNK/ WE ALL KNEW THE MURDER, HE WAS MY OLD BEST MATE FROM HIGH SKOOL/ I FUCKED HIM OFF A COUPLE OF YEAR AGO, HE STARTED ACTIN THE FOOL/ IF THERE IS ONE, THE FUNNY THING IS THAT IT HAPPENED ON 9/11 I AINT RELIGIOUS BUT GOD I HOPE THAT GUYS IN HEAVEN/ YOU KNOW, WHILE IM SAT HERE IN COLLEGE I COULD ALSO GET KILLED/ COZ THAT’S WHERE HER WAS, LEARNIN TO BECOME A BUILD-/ HER, HIM, ANY OF THESE PRICKS CUD KILL ME IF I SLACK FOR A SECOND/ BUT THEY'D END UP IN THE PEN, WUD THERE MOTIVES BE QUESTIONED?/ WAS IT OVER DRUGS, LAUGHS OR JUST FOR FUCKIN THEIR HOES?/ NO USE ASKIN ANYONE BUT THE FUCKIN KILLER, ONLY HE KNOWS/ I GOT BEEF AGAINST THE WORLD COZ THERES THINGS ‘N’ PEOPLE I’VE LOST/ TO REWIND TIME N DEAL WITH SHIT BETTER – HOW MUCH WUD IT COST?/ I WISH I CUD AV ANOTHER CHANCE OF PLAYIN LIFE DIFFERENTLY/ THE ONLY THING I ACHIEVED IS STAYIN OUT OF THE PENETENTARY/ JUST LIKE PAC I SEE NO CHANGES AND ITS ME AGAINST THE WORLD/ BUT UNLIKE BIGGIE I THINK MORE MONEY MORE PROBLEMS IS OBSERD/ CHORUS SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/ AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/ IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/ ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/ SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/ AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/ IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/ ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/ VERSE TWO SO ITS ME AGAINST THE WORLD, DAVID AGAINST GOLIATH/ AND AGAIN THE SMALLER FORCE IS GOIN TO TRIUMPH/ COZ I WONT LET THIS PLACE GET ME DOWN, ILL JUST DRINK HEAVILY/ AT THE END OF THE NITE - FALL INTO MY HOUSE, CAUSE STRESS MY FAMILY/ THAT’S OK THO COZ MY STEP DADDYS ALREADY DUN THAT/ FUCKED OFF LAST CHRISTMAS, LEFT NO MONEY, ACTIN THE TWAT/ AND NOW HE GOT A NEW WOMAN, ANOTHER SLAG TO SHAG IN HIS LIFE/ SO HE CAME ROUND TO TELL MY MOMMA AND CAUSE MORE STRIFE/ SHE'S THE SISTER OF A WOMAN WHO HAD AN AFFAIR WITH MY BIRTH FATHER/ HE DIED WHEN I WAS 1, HEART ATTACK, BUT THERES NO OTHER WAY I’D RATHER/ HAVE MY LIFE COZ I GOT MY MOM, BROTHER N SISTER OUT OF IT/ SOME PEOPLE WANNA DIE BUT COZ OF FAMILY I WANT THE OPPOSITE/ ME AND MY BROTHER ARE TIGHT LIKE STARSKY AND HUTCH/ WE SLING AND PARTY A LOT, NEVER BEEF TOO MUCH/ HE NEARLY DIED FROM CRUPE WHEN I WAS NEARLY THREE/ NOW WHENEVER I’M IN TROUBLE, HE BE THERE FOR ME/ MY MOM WAS BORN WITH 1 KIDNEY AND IT GOT INFECTED/ 2 THIRDS HAD TO BE DETATCHED WHEN A SIST WAS DETECTED/ MY SISTER AINT MY FULL, ONLY HALF FROM MY MOMS SIDE/ BUT SHE MIGHT AS WELL BE, THAT’S HOW IT FEEL INSIDE/ SHE AS CUTE AS CAN, WANTS TO BE A DANCING STAR/ AND LIKE THE SUN, I KNOW SHE GONNA BE THE BIGGEST BY FAR/ CHORUS SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/ AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/ IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/ ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/ SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/ AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/ IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/ ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/ VERSE THREE FUCK SITTIN BACK ON LIFE,CUM OUT ALL GUNS BLAZIN/ COZ I CAN’T BE TO SYNICAL ABOUT MY RAISIN/ MY MAMMAS BEEN LIKE A PILLAR, THERE AS MY SUPPORT/ WHEN I WAS PLAYIN UP AT SKOOL N GOT PUT ON REPORT/ AND WHEN I GOT SUSPENDED FOR FIGHTIN IN THE HALLWAY/ SHE SHOWN ME THE LIGHT HOPING THAT I WOULDN’T GO ASTRAY/ ITS TOO LATE FOR THAT COZ I ALREADY FUCKED UP IN COLLEGE/ FAILED LAST YEAR, GOTTA STAY ANDEXPAND MY KNOWLEDGE/ IM JUST CHILLIN HERE, WRITIN LYRICS WITH MY HOMMIES AND THE GIRLS/ BUT MY HEAD IS SPININ AND I CANT THINK OF ANY WORDS FOR THIS VERSE/ COZ MY MINDS GOIN CLOUDY AND NOTHINGS REALLY CLEAR/ WHATS GOIN ON IN MY MIND AINT WHAT I SHOW ON THE EXTER-IOR/ COZ I GOTTA KEEP MY HEAD UP N KEEP MY MIND SAIN/ SO MY LIL’ SIS FINKS EVERYFINS OK – SHE DON’T NEED NO PAIN/ NEITHER DO I, INFACT, NON OF Y’ALL MUTHA FUCKERS NEED IT/ SO WHY DON’T WE STOP MERCYLESS KILLINGS – AND JUST FUCKIN LEAVE IT/ AND IM SICK OF SEEIN TEENAGE BEAUTIES GETTING LEFT WITH KIDS/ USE A FUCKIN JOONY, GET AN ABORTION OR JUST FLICK UR OWN CLITS/ JUST DON’T GO HAVIN SEX, HAVIN KIDS AND GIVIN THEM A SHIT TIME/ EVERY NIGHT, TUCK EM IN BED, READ THEM A LIL’ STORY AND SING EM A RHYME/ SO IM GONNA SPIT U 1 LAST LINE TO THINK ABOUT LIFE/ CHILL, RELAX, AV PEACE AND STOP LIVIN BY THE GUN N KNIFE/ CHORUS SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/ AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/ IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/ ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/ SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/ AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/ IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/ ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/ |
Liked this piece mate.....kno what ya been goin thru n wots happened so I kno the story behind it etc
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woh
dayme this was tight, wordplay could do with a lil fixing up, but it was cool. rhymes ok, flow was word, apart from that it was worth reading!
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Fuck yeah! Fuck yeah! finally real fuckin mc on dis fuckin site!
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^ Moron.
Well .. .. i seriously don't know where to start on this, i read through it and my attention was wandering before half way if im honest = / The flow to me seemed off by a lot, it seemed to drift away off and on between topics .. a lot of the time the rhyming was basic, the caps lock didnt really help much - just hurt my fucking eyes to read this garbage. Wordplay was like .. non existant? Maybe its just me cause the newbies seemed to get it * shrugs* Overall i didnt like this at all. Sorry. Elevate. |
YO, UPPIN TO GET A LITTLE MORE FEEDBACK. CHANGED THE FLOE A LITTLE TO PUT IT ONTO MUSIC SO IF U CATS GIVE ME SUM FEEDBACK I'LL RECORD THE AUDIO AND PUT IT ONLINE.
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nice.....real nice ...I can feel what you saying homie.....
its seems real deep.....i like that ....stay real |
Go on Gaz Lad! Not bad i personally reckon 'My Mothers Wedding' Was better, but you cant compare yourself to me, haha. jus playin.
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not bad gaz.....Dappa where in coll are U?
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Im at home, i got up late, u foned me didnt'cha?
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yeah, gettin u bak for wakin me up the other nite ya cunt....PM me instead of ruinin gaz's thread
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