Mentill VS Twizzle Stix
 

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Verses Are Due: Friday 12/12/03

Put Up Or Shut The Fuck Up & Get The Fuck Out!!!!!

hehe....in

^He obviously didn't read the rules ... I should get a free vote already 'Volve ... LoL

My Verse ...
 

Blah ... I went 12 ... Match or do watever ...

No bitchin' ... Bet U gonna hit me off wit a pre-written
And word I remember Warlords - Juss not U bein' in it
Fucc shittin' on this kid ... That's startin' to get borin'
So im ignorin' that and endin' ur wits -
Look even ur avy's rootin' for me
Ur shit is poorly edited So Imma leave nothin' left of it
Jigga and Mya ain't write this verse -
But your still gettin' the best of it
Ur highly credited For bein' over-rated So Imma wiggle it
Im above while Ur in the middle kid ... Im watchin' U Twizzle Stix
Fa' shizzle bitch No Snoop imitator Im hittin' U wit fast steal
Nigga gave my girl crabs hittin' doggy style -
So I'm givin' him his last meal
U'll never git a cash deal ... So keep typin' Ur text - average
Im takin' the honors of this battle - Fucc it he can drop the ADDLiBs

I'll key 12...just to keep your whiney ass happy..

Yo, yo yo check...yo...ai yo...dig it..

Artificial intelligence?no...just another microsoft mis-adventure..
I wont son you...cos it just means a trip to the adoption centre..
even your stlyes left ya...You thought you'd start a fresh...
Your train of thought is running...all the way to marrakesh...
i thought u were ment to be ill...but ure drops keep digressing
i would say count your blessings...
...but once u reached 3 you'd start guessing
Your spelling mistakes are amusing...it's your time for a schooling
Hey! i'm try'na teach you some skills..so close ur mouth N stop drooling
When you fade to black...maybe...when you fade away..mos def
Your the leader of a fake crew...So do a favour and fake ya death
In this Round i'm advancing...to round 2 of this tourny...
...but when ur shit's dropping...its just leaving hip-hop all Corny....

.........bleh..

Mentill took this one with more complex punches and better structure,, twizzle came good but just not upto par with Mentills verse.. mentill had nice multies to help the flow of his verse too and he threw more personals, that should do

VOTE MENTILL

Not voting...until someone explains this punch to me.

"even your stlyes left ya...You thought you'd start a fresh...
Your train of thought is running...all the way to marrakesh..."

Marrakesh express....a train that ships criminals from Eygpt to marrakesh...

Thanks, Its Irrelovent To Your Punch
Mentill Took This With Punches & Personals. . .
Twizzle Had Some Nice Ones But That Line^ & Your Last Line Was Patheticly Weak
vote Ment

yep...i think MenTiLL too this with a more..
consistency verse...and harder hitting punches...
and came with some ok personals....
twizzle u came decent....but just fell off during the end....
of ur verse...so my vote goes to MenTiLL....
for a overall better verse....

Gh05t!

gotta say both came pretty poorly
twizzles was quite funny...but rushed and therefor didnt really hit that hard
not saying mentill was that much better but he won with a more well rounded verse

metnill jsut beat twixt in more of the categories

i was really feeling his wit more and his punches were slightly better. flow was easier to read as well
v/ment

With that explanation, yes, I'd have to go with Mentill as well too. I was thinking maybe there was some hidden special meaning behind that punch I was totally missing. Mentill just took it all the way pretty much. Not a bad battle and Twizz you did have some nice lines. Just wasn't addin up...seemed like you were rushin it. Godd battle..

Vote ~ mentill

Damn guys. Half ass it much?

vote- Mentill.

although he didnt have the best verse ever, he had a few punches in there that did more than enough to tip the scales in his favor.

Mentill Wins
Twizz Loses & Is Out