[ - Evil Twin.. Ft.Potent - ]
 

Evil Twin: Edicius Ft..Potent..

Never know i had a brother..lately i found out..
Feld this sorten power, when i was walking thru a croud..
In a life filled with sin.. i found out i was just that evil twin,
he is simalar in appearence.. yet not a failure ,...but made to win .
A little brother..but is it good for him to hang out with me..
i who never feld joy..how can he be free..?
Is it good for us to get together...
Ironically the seqeunce keep repeating ,
but the ending keep unremarkably unique
The power&effort in our hearts keep beating
we dont want to, but the situation is drained in mystique
so i guess we must just give it a chance..
and if it fails than this is our final dance, ..
Would he be judgemental..i dont know..
Can i help it that i'm..
Tryin to provoke unhealthy levels of excitement..
in to the fragile hearts of my readers..
Giving them a taste of my view on incitement..
like life! trowing down meat..im on of a million feeders
While shadows of doom sneaking around, silently taken me down
While maintaining the considerable actual physical harm..
ensuing chaos..
in this crowd, of people ..simalar to a farm..

So call me evil..

Potent

I will finally have someone to do my Homework With
Oh. . Minorly he's meant to be the Worlds Worst Kid
Girls First Hid, but All I care for is about Meeting Him
All I think about. . Is how I would start Greeting Him
My Hearts Weakening. . Now I know that I've a twin
I Strive on Kins, But I when we meet I Might Cringe
Or he may be one of those punks Witha Shite Fringe
Wither Sightings, He may Dislike Me or Despite Me!?
He might Strike Me, But I've taken it Lightly
Thats all I could do, This light had shone at Us Two
Not a Single-Cuss Blew, with the biggest Luck New
So I sit here with my life clear yet Obaque at Once
If opposites attract? Well he's a Straight Up Dunce
I'm Faking Flunk, So maybe we might Find Laterals
I Wish the Times Actual Bliss

E Dick's opened the piece up decent enough,
contenet was there but it you seriously need
to ditch that one syllable rhyming word shit &
use multi's man .. flow worked well with it for
me, stayed on point and what not, transition
wasnt bad .. moved the piece along .. did ok
as the 'evil' twin .. Potent came off the better
of the two .. flow was there, multi's and such
seemed forced at times but i actually imagined
this as an audio .. lol .. it wasnt bad though,
a decent collab .. styles complimented each other


Be thankful i was arsed to reply, Bitches. = )

^Blah..i'm tryin to use more multis..but i dont feel them ...but thnx for the ..nice reply hoe = )

Shyt wus aight....^^ she always got sum hate!!......but fucc it jus keep it up!!