Origin v/s Amend
 

Crew Battle
10 Lines
5 Votes
No KO's
No D/R
No Recycling
Due Tommorrow By Midnight
Check In. . .

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Amend was never to smart..why he always hated on Black Tie
Lost..even his clouded vision never elevated to black sky's
Noones feelin ya presents..so..amends resorted to wrappin (Presents=presence)
Amend gave birth to his wackness..n damn them lips flappin (Crew)
Only time ya dope is when ya mom pulls out the tree at xmas
Im straight destructive..look..even my record is wreckless
Amend neva bit the bullet..he ate it..afraid to spit first
Ya wackness gotta lil carried away..hands down inna herse
Amend's still a rookie..he'll never write with the prose (prose=style)
Ya feeback is negative..cus ya wackness is gettin exposed

Another Rule: No Feeding

im posting it in Elevated. . .
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lol some1 did there research

i gotta feelin this is gonna take a while

uppin 1

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origin sorrily kills amend with a verse

















































not even a battle amend u suck
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