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tha coming
fuck it...
yo a rap board? call me the rap-lord// if i aint invited ill coem thru the back-door// i aint new to da game but im new-to-da-board// i spit shells and send two-to-ya-hor// and maybe a few-to-ya-porch// im from nj theres nuthin i wouldnt do-to-ya-porshe// im not sumone who u should be playin-wit-man// ill make ya whole life a scene like puffy's makin-da-band// im takin a stand..im makin sum plans B// ya shit aint a challenge like the marlins vs. the yankees// im the most illest, ill grab a knife and cut ya throat wit it// im the most known villain, i beat emcees in a short minute// im more worse in person, especially when im cursin// there will never be anotha guy ull feel sorry about versin// fuck it im not done, around here im the hot one// real emcees here? nah i dont spot none// the only thing ya pussies claim u got is shotguns// and ya so ugly when ya fucked ya pregnant-lady// the bitch came out with creatures that resembled gremlin-babies// and for the record im known to make bitches piss themselves wit four-words// and ill "blow-up" in ya face so ya cant "C4"-wards// (forwards) ( yea yea) |
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but this was alright i thought.....structure was ok, could use a bit of work though, towards the end it kinda got stretched lines but nothing real big.....liked the multies you used....vocab in this was alright...overall alright piece...keep at it. |
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Re: tha coming
yo man that was alright.....igot what u were sayin' most of the way but kinda lost on the.........
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but any way ur sh**t was tight:thumbup: |
yo homie,
u elevatin...... jus keep up wit ur flow n up ur vocab, multis, n youll be fire. return the favor please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97593 |
yo some opinions oh this shit
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