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Provoked Images 12-09-03 03:15 PM

Yu Bin SunD vs AngellicalR
 
10 lines max.................
all rules apply...................
x-plain votes to an honest x-tent.....................
g'luck.................................

Provoked Images 12-09-03 03:33 PM

Forget a taliban, Osama’s brother… man is steadily wearin a dress…
And that guy in ur sig is dressed in suit n tie… already ready for ur death…
And when females find out about this cross dresser… he’s sh!t out-a luck…
Cause tha “pooch” in his avy is tha only “b!tch” he’s really about to f*ck…
Perform like a gecko… stick to ur word wit perfect genetic grip… << profile
Ur mind can’t be spoken n u can’t hurt mine… even if he was usin telekinetic hits…
Stop wit tha nonsense… got no respect for basics from a pet…
Elevate first… in fact… take ur problems to get fixed by a racist vet…
Cause then… when tha slavery is backwards n it’s strange to see…
A white man in a noose… only then will this kat actually hang wit me…

If u don’t get it… THEN DON’T VOTE U NOOBS!!!

At school so I can’t swear… but u should know wat most say…

G’luck, drop when u can…

Provoked Images 12-11-03 02:19 PM

uppin for yu's verse...
u got til tha 12th noon...
so drop as soon as possible...
and clear out ur mailbox...
i couldn't pm u wit this link...
come on now...

Provoked Images 12-12-03 02:46 PM

come on now, uppin uppin uppin, don't prewrite man...

and my line:

And that guy in ur sig is dressed in suit n tie… already ready for ur death…

had to do wit Yu's otha sig, he changed it though...

so drop Yu...

Yu Bin SunD 12-12-03 02:56 PM

yo my bad i'll drop tonight i dun got time rite now that's y i been busy so i'll drop soon i'm not ditching.......................................... .................................................. ..........

Yu Bin SunD 12-12-03 06:22 PM

He's Constantly Comin Back To Earth...I Guess He Just Enjoys Getting Murked..|(he's angel)
Angel It's Time For You To Go To Heaven Cause Like Throwin Up On Grass Wat You Spitt In's Dirt..|(Get It)
Leave Em Stuck On This Thread Make Sure Friction Works..But Angel Hard Nah He's More See Thru Than Wet T-Shirts..|
I'll Take His Point And Reverse It On Him And Quickly Slice Him..|(his sig)
Cause Only Time He Serves Shots Is With A Liquor License..|
He Sayin He Can't Be Burned..So How The Hell Is He In Heaven..|
O I Get Why He Dunno Where He Belongs Because Neither One Let Him In..|(His Location)
So I'll Treat This Bitch Like My Wife And Say Wat's Worst Dear??..|
Gettin Your Ass Fucked...Or Havin Your Battlin Rec The Same As Ya Birth Year..|(after this he'll me 8-6 born year)

GaZeeBo 12-12-03 06:26 PM

very good battle.very amusing. i think this battle goes to yu bin sund because of the better punches. no hate at all great battle and maybe i can battle one of u some time. yo yu that birth year line was great keep up the good work and for angellical the hangin line was good. again great battle but i think yu got the upper hand.

hit this up and give it an honest vote. return the favor thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98360

Yu Bin SunD 12-12-03 07:49 PM

uppin this shit uppin 1................................................. .................................................. ...............................

TheProphet777 12-12-03 07:59 PM

yu took this shit easily no explainitions BUT honestly yu had more punches and was targeting everything on angel. keep elevating angel! those that see this shit uppin for votes on my slept battles NO HATE GUYS!Honest votes!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98186
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97328

Yu Bin SunD 12-12-03 09:52 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupin............................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........................................

Spekta 12-13-03 09:31 AM

HAHAHA, this was a decent battle.

I gotta say tho:

Open:Angel
Close: (first line): Angel
Close (last line):Tie
^wouldn't USUALLY break this up, but that's how THIS one went.
Wordplay: Yu
Punches: Yu
Flow: Angel
Personals: Yu <nice b-day line...
Multis: ehh!
Meta's: Angel

Vote: Yu -just had a tighter verse.

Vote: Yu

.:K:. 12-13-03 10:08 AM

ite yu got this good battle but his verse just hit harder with punches and some good wordplay ur verse was abit streched but good.


put an honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98490 ..thx
..pz

Casual 12-13-03 10:17 AM

Flow - Angelic
Punches - Sund
Personals - Sund
Originality - Both
Structure - Angelic

VoTe = Sund

Sund took the more important of the catergories in this battle.. but pretty close still.

Peep this:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98490

...~1~


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