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kalibur VS VerBal siKkneSS
10 linez max
no dr no hate no crew no feed due 20min. afta check in u spit first check in........ |
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checkin.. here's my verse....
with this needle and thread I'll sew reverse psychology on your head, so I can change your minds instead, of letting you think that you can contess/1 : i inject these 'rats' with venenum to infect YOU 'cats' who think that they have what it takes in em' but i'm the owner of vets and thats at the minium/2 ok, kill the lights, now I’m overshadowing you like chills at night foreal I’ll tax your freedom of speech now pay your bill of rights/3 my checklist checks bitches left and right fulfilling death wishes your neck twitches with your last breath of life when death visits. where your next existance?/4 you might be 6 feet deep in the earth so you better think of church or you’ll be falling to sleep with a new birth in hell you search to excel your useless verbs but once again this herb fails /5 |
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sry i was eatin, ill spit now..................................
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'Ruptured ryhmes" will rip ya lyk molesting crimes and sick, gay mimes//
Confused da 'forums', cuz u gettin 'bitchslapped' in 'frontlines'// Heres a free lesson, take it while ya got da chance kid// Cuz winning doesnt come wit dick rydin, seeing his votes come for AIM and private messages// Dis kat off, lyk he hyped off 8-mile, dumbass,...think typin backwords is swtichen ya 'key~style'// This battle is obsured, put dis kat on trial, I'd stop dis now but 2-0 looks good on my profile// Ya flow's kinda 'rocky', and ya punches is 'hallow'// Say ya 'spit' hard on da mic, nah dawg, u only 'swallow'(spit or swallow=suck dick)// So b da gangsta u say u r, wave ya glock, show me wat ya got// But u betta watch ya mouth b4 u end up lyk 2pac// lets get some votes................ not my stongest.......o well |
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good battle the problems with these verses VS: your lines where to strecthed and i wasn't feeling the complexity and vocab of it, and your rhyme scheme was off. Kali: your lines seemed a lil played seeing how i read anotheer battle about bitch slaps in front lines but you had some good punches through out your verse i think kali took this battle because of his punches compined with flow and structure over all good battle |
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ya'll been lookin at least vote come on dont b sleepin on dis...............................................
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not a good battle really....
s'pose it was fair between you both, but nothin special came out. both had stretched lines.....and both need to work on structure..... i'd sayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy kali took this just bcuz there was harder hitting punches. thats the only reason for the vote....nothin else was good enuff to deserve a vote. not hate vote = kali |
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VS:stretched lines wasnt feelin da flow,punch's were weak!!...practice more n elevate aiight! Kalibur:shyt was aiight way harder punch's flow was a lil better good job!...... Vote:Kalibur Reason:Overall he had da better verse!! 0n3 |
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