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Rap~Man vs. Phoeniix
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no hate, crew, d/r all votes must be explained well no quoting votes. spit 30 minutes after u check in. i'll check in right after you. |
checkin it. im sick of waiting for you. your online but i dont know what the fuck ur doing. so maybe this will upp and u will see this as im keyin and then i will spit first whatever. good luck.
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yo u fuckin phoeniix, your probibly form the fuckin stix/
ur rhymes u try to fix, but ur suckin a bunch of pricks//-1 ur chick prob has a dick, but she clams that it's a bic/(lighter) ur a newbie without a pic, ur startin to make me sick//-2 i'm bout to turn da table, after i'm done u won't b able/ to stand without a cable, put ur ass back in da stable//-3(like a horse) ur an alien from ven-us, probibly came here on a bus/ porb got a penis but lets keep that shit between us//-4 slit ur throat with a razor blade, see ur fuckin life faide/ call a bunch of men n start a cavacade, that'll be a rade//-5 |
yo i fucked up on that typin to fuckin fast lol this"ur an alien from ven-us, probibly came here on a bus/
porb got a penis but lets keep that shit between us//-4" should be this"ur an alien from ven-us, probibly came here on a bus/ porb don't even have a penis but lets keep that shit between us" |
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but WACK-man would suit you better, according to your recent posts u wanna learn multis?...well use this for your blueprint your a useless excuse for a confusion of stupid music you blew it, so u seeked help....its fucking logical but I just you broke you down again, get your ass back to the hospital dont doubt me rapman, it aint like your records better fakeass vet--who frequents the wackness emergency center DMX wannabe, will it help when i leave you bleeding? You got X's dick so far down ya throat that u aint breathing learn the rules bitch, now even Axe is mad at ya... so for RB's infestation of the herbs like rap~man...Blame Canada dont forget to click those links...they are funny. hes from canada DMX is covered in blood on his album cover, he loves DMX now spit it bitch. lets see what u got. |
^lmao at this newb
he already did spit n fuck you for dissing canad a you punk, i should merk you but any way lol all in fun and textbattling.............. i think phoniiex took this with personals and punches rap man i wasn't feeling yuour verse at all phoe tried harder and came harder periode, like girls bleeding heavy |
UPPIN (1)
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raP-MAN ne1 THERE I MEAN COME ON U DIDNT THINK YOU COULD WIN THAT EASILY DID YOU u STRAIGHT SUCK N E WAY NICE BATTLE AND GOOD PUNCHES PHOENIXX
mY VOTE=PHOENIXX |
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flow-pheonix
punches-pheonix structure-pheonix rhyme-tie wordplay-tie personals-pheonix entertainment-pheonix vote-pheonix vote on my battle when the other guy posts handcuffs \/ anaconda ~peace~ good job, exciting battle |
Vote - Ph'
he had a wayyyyy better flow than anyone I've seen on this shit, good personals...worded really well...good punchlines here and there....Rap was aiiight but he was 2 basic than most...had some good lines...but none was 2 well 2 beat Ph.. vote on this in return. Cannabarz vs Opponent |
dayme...i was expectin less but ya both delivered
Breakdown--- Punches-Phoenix Flow-Both Structure-Both Enjoyment-Phoenix..i liked the links..lol Sustainment-Both Metas-Phoenix.. Overall- Phoenix good battle ya'll pz MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PZ..BEING SLEPT ON http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97599 |
not me dawg.....i'll already polled my shit pz
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