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Phoeniix 12-09-03 06:01 PM

Rap~Man vs. Phoeniix
 
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no hate, crew, d/r

all votes must be explained well

no quoting votes.


spit 30 minutes after u check in. i'll check in right after you.

Phoeniix 12-09-03 06:39 PM

checkin it. im sick of waiting for you. your online but i dont know what the fuck ur doing. so maybe this will upp and u will see this as im keyin and then i will spit first whatever. good luck.

Rap~Man 12-09-03 06:58 PM

checkin in................................................ ................................
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Rap~Man 12-09-03 07:02 PM

yo u fuckin phoeniix, your probibly form the fuckin stix/
ur rhymes u try to fix, but ur suckin a bunch of pricks//-1
ur chick prob has a dick, but she clams that it's a bic/(lighter)
ur a newbie without a pic, ur startin to make me sick//-2
i'm bout to turn da table, after i'm done u won't b able/
to stand without a cable, put ur ass back in da stable//-3(like a horse)
ur an alien from ven-us, probibly came here on a bus/
porb got a penis but lets keep that shit between us//-4
slit ur throat with a razor blade, see ur fuckin life faide/
call a bunch of men n start a cavacade, that'll be a rade//-5

Rap~Man 12-09-03 07:07 PM

yo i fucked up on that typin to fuckin fast lol this"ur an alien from ven-us, probibly came here on a bus/
porb got a penis but lets keep that shit between us//-4"
should be this"ur an alien from ven-us, probibly came here on a bus/
porb don't even have a penis but lets keep that shit between us"

Phoeniix 12-09-03 07:08 PM

trendy emcees play on super hero names, most are decent hosts
but WACK-man would suit you better, according to your recent posts
u wanna learn multis?...well use this for your blueprint
your a useless excuse for a confusion of stupid music
you blew it, so u seeked help....its fucking logical
but I just you broke you down again, get your ass back to the hospital
dont doubt me rapman, it aint like your records better
fakeass vet--who frequents the wackness emergency center
DMX wannabe, will it help when i leave you bleeding?
You got X's dick so far down ya throat that u aint breathing
learn the rules bitch, now even Axe is mad at ya...
so for RB's infestation of the herbs like rap~man...Blame Canada

dont forget to click those links...they are funny.

hes from canada
DMX is covered in blood on his album cover, he loves DMX


now spit it bitch. lets see what u got.

Kautious 12-09-03 07:28 PM

^lmao at this newb
he already did spit

n fuck you for dissing canad a you punk, i should merk you

but any way lol all in fun and textbattling..............

i think phoniiex took this with personals and punches
rap man i wasn't feeling yuour verse at all

phoe tried harder and came harder periode,

like girls bleeding heavy

Phoeniix 12-09-03 07:46 PM

UPPIN (1)

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blackguy 12-09-03 07:49 PM

raP-MAN ne1 THERE I MEAN COME ON U DIDNT THINK YOU COULD WIN THAT EASILY DID YOU u STRAIGHT SUCK N E WAY NICE BATTLE AND GOOD PUNCHES PHOENIXX

mY VOTE=PHOENIXX

Phoeniix 12-09-03 08:29 PM

UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0
UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0UPPIN THIS SHIT 2-0

POST YA LINK AND I'LL HIT IT

Handcuffs 12-09-03 08:38 PM

flow-pheonix
punches-pheonix
structure-pheonix
rhyme-tie
wordplay-tie
personals-pheonix
entertainment-pheonix

vote-pheonix


vote on my battle when the other guy posts

handcuffs \/ anaconda

~peace~

good job, exciting battle

D.Zaster 12-09-03 08:41 PM

Vote - Ph'

he had a wayyyyy better flow than anyone I've seen on this shit, good personals...worded really well...good punchlines here and there....Rap was aiiight but he was 2 basic than most...had some good lines...but none was 2 well 2 beat Ph..

vote on this in return.

Cannabarz vs Opponent

B.I.Detained 12-09-03 08:41 PM

dayme...i was expectin less but ya both delivered
Breakdown---
Punches-Phoenix
Flow-Both
Structure-Both
Enjoyment-Phoenix..i liked the links..lol
Sustainment-Both
Metas-Phoenix..
Overall- Phoenix
good battle ya'll pz

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PZ..BEING SLEPT ON
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97599

B.I.Detained 12-09-03 08:48 PM

not me dawg.....i'll already polled my shit pz
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