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Verbal SiKkneSS VS gangsta one
alright again..
10 lines or more due tomorrow.. house rules 3-0 is KO first to 5 wins checkin |
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heres my verse.. My Verbal skillz are dope and strong I’ll put them in yo ass so deep and dirty it’d be like Oprahs-Thong!//1 You better hurry quick-n-give up my lines are over you so you’d have to swing to hit-up infact you still can’t reach, you ain’t even Old Enough to get-ya-Dick-Up!//2 A gangsta from Canada is like a hick going to new York when they use they’re guns you guys uses a pitch-forks//3 The day you use a noose to hang your body will be the day I’ll bring the dailey news to your fuck up mommy//4 I think I’m not in the right-place this dude is label as a light-weight armed wit pillows when I have fist that might-rage//5 bar 3 he’s from Canada and his name starts with gangsta bar 5 he’s title is light-weight g0od luck |
Yo...check it...
Ya fakeness Ima expose, ya trash, Ima dispose, befo this battle even started tha case was closed// Ya see ma name an ya annoyed, tha fact that im ill isn't easy ta avoid, step up, 'n get destroyed// A "restuaraunt"* from California, I've defeated tha faggots before ya, I am ya death, I enduce ya parinoya// Befo tha call out I saw ya presence, 'n it wasn' now, it was then when i smashed ya essence// Smash ya 'till ya face implode, ya fate been told, ya rhymes remindin' me of somethin' from an 8-year old...// *His occupation in his profile jus' says resturaunt Sry bout tha wait dawg...gl on tha pollz... |
good job you win
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^^^^^^^^^^Dick Rider
Fuckin' explain ya votes, dickhead. Didn' ya read tha rulz at tha top of Frontlines? Explain ya votez! |
GANGSTAONE it was a hate vote....He gonna get banned
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Shi', u righ' dawg...i hope tha' mo' fucka does get BANNED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lol wasnt the best battle but...
Breakdown-- Punches-G.O Flow-None Sustainment-G.O Structure-None Metas-G.O Overall-G.O.. both ya'll sort ya structure plz..props tho pz MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP...BEING SLEPT ON PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97712 |
A'ight thx dawg uppin(1)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Uppin(2)This bein slept on^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Bein' Slept on hardcore....Uppin'(3)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^
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gangster one overpowered this...like BI sed the structure was kinda weird
but vote-g1.... can u hit this up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748 |
A'ight, thx dawg, too abd ya can' poll vote.............................................. .................................................. ...
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Oh, 'n try ta make ya explanations longer too................don' wan' any trouble wit tha mods.............................................. ...................
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this was a pretty weak battle i thought. but Gangsta took this one, his was harder hittin,... didnt like the way you's set it out, ...why?.......
punches=gangsta flow=gangsta(just) structure=tie metas=gangsta(weak) wordplay=gangsta creativity=tie opener=gangsta closer=gangsta vote=gangsta, both could be improved.....pZ |
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