Relationships - Mentill and Dez
 

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Dez

You were always there for me.. never turned your back
The great equalizer.. when these teams were stacked
I envoked you, and always held you close to my heart
Whisperin' things to you to get your 'motor' to start
The best part of my day, was when I was with you
I never knew one thing, could make life so simple
You were always on my mental..though you sucked funds
Baby I was always glad to give you all of my income
We had fun, I only had to fill you up once a week..
And I could confide in you, cuz my secrets you would keep
But now your dead, your vitals were leakin on the floor..
Even though youre gone I still love you, my '91 Escort.



Mentill


I used to love U, cherish, adore and wanna hold you
Was young when we 1st met, But somehow inherited the old you
I told you I'd help mold U into a better person
So when the time came I started searchin' 4 reasons 2 prove I didn't leave on purpose
And when I purchased a ticket and decided 2 travel away
I buried our relationship, Only 2 come back years later pushin' the gravel away
Im sadder today than I was yesterday and prolly will be tomorrow
So I've chosen to follow my heart, The one you prolly think is hollow
When I went broke I'd try to borrow dollars from my peers to wipe away the tears
Cuz I feared that you wouldn't want me back after all of these years
Cheers! The thought has had me strangled from different angles
Eyebrows to ankles, So I thank you, Hip Hop, 4 acceptin' me back 4 another tango

LoL ... Dope verse there Dez U brought an ill comical side to the collab ... Sick ... Let us get some replies people ... Peace

up you fuckin hoes, 25 views and no replies?

Dez had a pretty creative verse, bringing a bit of comical energy. Good job on flow and other areas, and it made his verse seem lighthearted, Mentill had a bit of sloppy structure, but his lines made up for that weakness, bringing a deeper, more emotional side of the piece. Both did a very good job.

Pretty Ill Collab Ya'll Got Here. Dez, You're Verse Was Funny As Fuck. . Flow Was On-Point. . Like Skiddz Said. . Very Lighthearted And Easy To Get Into. Mentill, Structure Was Off A Bit, But The Content Easily Made For That. I Loved How Ya'll Had Too Different Styles Through Content But The Collab Meshed Well. Keep Droppin Ya'll.

-Formula.

** Peep "The Ultimate Power Struggle" When I Get It Up Aiight. . Greatly Appreciated **

Shit that was funny dez, haha good shit, the flow was there and the flippin the topic was good..

mentill your structure was hard to follow but your flow was good i liked the emotion you put into it.. good shit

Cheers To A.I. owning the Open Mic Thread ;)

Word ... Thanks for peepin' this ya'll ... But it still deserves some more replies ... They would be appreciated ... Peace

mad props to both of yall. This is the first thing ive seen from mentil and it was hot. and sinice ive been here ive seen nothing but hot shit from dez keep doing yallz thing.

Holla at em.

Uppin this piece one more time ... Thanks for the replies ...

You guys are both dope i liked how dez told his part it was good plus the imagery was tight..

Now mentill your verse was filled with good content and i liked the whole thing nice job mangs..

Keep it coming..1

BOTH CAME ILL AS FUCK EVERY ASPECT WAS THERE BUT DEZ WHY DO YOU HAVE MY GIRLS PIC IN YOUR AVATAR?
IS SOME SHIT I DONT KNOW OF GOING ON?????????
GOOD POST ILL LYRICS AND CONCPET EXPLOITATION.

lol...i love them females.