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this is a demo version of a track from an upcoming cd I'm working on....I have about 13 tracks recorded for it, so it's not like this is the only song I have..it's just the only one I have online right now..btw I can't reply to audios that are on soundclick.com (even though mine are on the site too)...and since every fucking thread I've viewed had the track on soundclick I haven't had anything to reply to....but I wanna get my shit heard...I can reply on another comp but it'll be a day or 2 before that happens...if u need to just close my thread until I reply....

www.soundclick.com/bands/8/rapidfiremusic.htm


peace

(btw if you got an audio on another website I'll gladly listen)

aint feelin this shit... ur flow too slow....

hmm...
 

like tha beat, but your flow is too slow.

^ iight ya'll didn't listen to the whole track...cuz for the first half of the second verse I spit pretty fast actually...but for most of the song u gotta spit slow to be on beat...oh well...whatever floats ur boat lol...but can I get some actualy criticism?

peace