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Metaphorm 12-09-03 11:39 PM

Phoeniix vs. Metaphorm
 
Rules:
o 10 bars/lines
o First to 5 votes
o Check In ASAP
o 12:00 AM EST

Phoeniix 12-09-03 11:42 PM

mic checkkkkkkkkkkk................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

Metaphorm 12-10-03 12:00 AM

Phoeniix, We Have a Problem:
you're a gangsta? than where the fuck all the guns and wars be,
man even in the alphabet, Phoeniix will just never come before me..
you testing the demon? I just plan to leave you rested in pieces,
losing to you? that's like an atheist reciting the pledge of allegiance..
kid, I got punchlines and mean bars, you got no time to re-charge,
the only reason this kid's a big challenge is 'cause he's a giant retard..
I'm truth, you a hoax, accepting the battle was a misuse of a post,
because my victory'll be clear cut, like a guillotine used on a ghost..
he knows that he's wack an about to lose, yo I'm smoking this faggot,
I'll have Phoeniix embarrassed with no comebacks like a broken elastic..

Phoeniix 12-10-03 12:10 AM

witness NIIX as a catalyst for your metamorphosis
transformin this kid into a bitch bleedin out all of his orifices
im filled with guilt for this kill, i sweared i'd never hit a lady
but im rightfully defending RB from this biter, cuz now they all got rabies
u cant attack NIIX wit ya wackness, and thats a fucking fact bitch
challenge me? ya bound to choke like a belemic with fat wrists
metamorph, u dork, lemme teach you, fucking 14 year old student
this can be a positive learning experience, just dont tell mommy about the bruises
im splittin this kid like dividens, gon have 2 halves of your corpse
the way im carving you up 50-50, its like your torso got divorced

TRIBAL 12-10-03 12:36 AM

yo

nice stronge battle from you both

opener p
personals p
creativity tie
injoyment p
closer p

overall no hate vote goes to Phoeniix nice hard battle

peace

Explict 12-10-03 12:38 AM

opener-pho
punches-meta
meta's-Pho
multies-pho
flow-pho
structure-meta
finisher-pho

nice verses by both.. but pho came way harder than meta.. that last verse by pho (50-50 its like your torso got divorced0 cracked me up crazystyle..meta you did aiigh just not enough to beat pho..
overall-phoeniix.. no hate just a vote..

The Real Sizz 12-10-03 12:53 AM

Can't poll yet but uppin thread: Vote Pheonix

Close battle but i thought his metas were stronger:

challenge me? ya bound to choke like a belemic with fat wrists

im splittin this kid like dividens, gon have 2 halves of your corpse
the way im carving you up 50-50, its like your torso got divorced


Also like the lines:

metamorph, u dork, lemme teach you, fucking 14 year old student
this can be a positive learning experience, just dont tell mommy about the bruises

Menik 12-10-03 02:36 AM

This was a pretty good battle here..
Punches: Pho
Flow: Pho
Structure: Meta
Multies: Pho
Vocab: Both
Overall this was a pretty good battle but i think Pho took this one though, props to both, vote goes to Pho

Yaz 12-10-03 02:49 AM

veary ni¢e battle yo... herse my breakdown

flow:Phoeniix (followed easer)
mutlies:Metaphorm
pun¢hs:Phoeniix
personals:Phoeniix
beginin:Metaphorm
end:Phoeniix
enjoiment:Phoeniix
over all:Phoeniix

keep it krakin yo (\1/)

FlowzLuCiouS 12-10-03 12:42 PM

Aiight........

opener-phoenix
punches-metaphorms
meta's-Phoenix
multies-phoenix
flow-phoenix
structure-metaphorm
finisher-phoenix

meta:nice job jus come harder next time!!

pho:nice work u get my vote!

Vote:Phoenix

0n3

Metaphorm 12-10-03 02:36 PM

Lmao. I guess cats here don't look at battle verses the same way I do. Kid didn't even have one metaphor or hard hitting punch in his verse. Seems weird to me but ohh well.

menolin 12-10-03 02:39 PM

opener:phoenix
closer:phoenix
punches:phoenix
structure:tie
vocab:phoenix
wordplay:tie
overall:phoenix

it was closer than i put it there metphorm, just work on ya flow.



aiight

plz hit the battle in my sig up.

peace

Dick Tator 12-10-03 02:45 PM

phoenix over powered it altho Meta had some nice line such as

I'm truth, you a hoax, accepting the battle was a misuse of a post,
because my victory'll be clear cut, like a guillotine used on a ghost..

but they werent too hard...Phoenix got this

can u vote on this please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6808#post976808

Phoeniix 12-10-03 04:04 PM

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Born To Kill 12-10-03 04:22 PM

Close battle but Phoenix takes it with the harder punches...

I'd have ta give wordplay to Meta...
Some of that was pretty clever.

But Phoenix had some good stuff too ("bulimic/fat wrist") that didn't let his opponent's wordplay blow him out.

Points off for making me squint, Meta...

That goes towards bad format.

What's wrong with regular sized font?

Like I said, real close...

Just harder stuff from Phoenix...

Peace


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