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$pitacular Vs B.I.Detained
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no feedin no hate votes, explained votes only crew votes OK good luck |
Yo check it,
You B.I.Detained… well I.B.Deranged cuz I'ma Killer U Bitin my Rhymes cuz it's Great Taste & Less Filler Executive? They told him he got a Office with Windows… It was… a cubicle & a PC with Microsoft XP (DOH!) Herb needs to Grow, got you Wet to Help Water Ya U have to be Male to get Sonned, so I guess I Daughtered Ya! Plus ya Style's got less Flavor than a Bottle of Water Does Spill ya Intestines… to Battle me Takes a Lotta Guts I'm glad One of us is "Content With The Shitty Thangs" (see sig) Cuz I like Lot's of Money, Fine Honeys and Many Thangs LOL spit when you get a chance |
sup blood..finished my battles n my c'work lol
lets get moving ....good luck either way pz lol to your Avater..loser thinks left over Seaman is Dr'ing $pit.. ..but your Fans still couldnt Surpass your future 5-0 Defecit see $pit' was in Black Tie...but got rejected from the Execs.. ..its the same fuckin crew..and this tryout verse's a Wreck how du expect to be Recruited..with a 10 loss, Mocked Margin? ..Controlled the battle so much..Spit keeps callin me Sergeant I've seen more Anept Punches from Steven Hawkins Computer... ..I jus stole the last of your Pride away..call me an Iraqui Looter Fuckin Loser..asks me for a Battle..Fails Miserably to take my Rec' ..he thought by being the Ends Secretary..that wud gain Respect |
opener - retained
closer - retained...spit that was probably the worst one ive seen to date punches - spit...this was best bar Herb needs to Grow, got you Wet to Help Water Ya U have to be Male to get Sonned, so I guess I Daughtered Ya! retained this was your best bars see $pit' was in Black Tie...but got rejected from the Execs.. ..its the same fuckin crew..and this tryout verse's a Wreck how du expect to be Recruited..with a 10 loss, Mocked Margin? ..Controlled the battle so much..Spit keeps callin me Sergeant all in all retained had way more original punches that were personals so harder hitting personals - retained...explained it above wordplay - both were equal in this vocab - spit:) originality - retained overal - retained...good spit from both of you but retained won with punch personals |
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Spit
You B.I.Detained… well I.B.Deranged cuz I'ma Killer U Bitin my Rhymes cuz it's Great Taste & Less Filler Descent punch, good play on his name, straight flow Executive? They told him he got a Office with Windows… It was… a cubicle & a PC with Microsoft XP (DOH!) Nice multi and straight flow, hard punch Herb needs to Grow, got you Wet to Help Water Ya U have to be Male to get Sonned, so I guess I Daughtered Ya! Straight punch weak & played tho, descent flow Plus ya Style's got less Flavor than a Bottle of Water Does Spill ya Intestines… to Battle me Takes a Lotta Guts Good meta's straight punch, good flow I'm glad One of us is "Content With The Shitty Thangs" (see sig) Cuz I like Lot's of Money, Fine Honeys and Many Thangs LOL First line was a descent personal, second was wack. BID lol to your Avater..loser thinks left over Seaman is Dr'ing $pit.. ..but your Fans still couldnt Surpass your future 5-0 Defecit Lol nice personals, nice punch, nice flow see $pit' was in Black Tie...but got rejected from the Execs.. ..its the same fuckin crew..and this tryout verse's a Wreck Nice personal again, straight punch, nice flow how du expect to be Recruited..with a 10 loss, Mocked Margin? ..Controlled the battle so much..Spit keeps callin me Sergeant LMAO Sick personal punch, nice flow, hot wordplay I've seen more Anept Punches from Steven Hawkins Computer... ..I jus stole the last of your Pride away..call me an Iraqui Looter LOL Sick meta's hard punch Fuckin Loser..asks me for a Battle..Fails Miserably to take my Rec' ..he thought by being the Ends Secretary..that wud gain Respect Nice, not sure if thats a personal or not, good flow, descent punch. Straight battle, seen better from both but BID got this. ~1~ |
thanks for voting, B.I. nice job mayne you killin me here
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Well, honestly...
Both of these verses are way below par from ya norm... Spit seemed to mostly talk about himself. (opener/closer) And throw weak shit like the "computer" talk. Why? Your single best line was the "daughtered" one. That's it, man...sorry. B.I. hit pretty soft and played ("Hawkins" is played, anything "Iraqi" is too)... But he had some tight personals in there that helped him wreck this battle. Wordplay and flow and shit were about even. This came down to personals and punches...for B.I. |
yo bi detained got this. good battle by both. hit these up with a honest vote.
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wtf???^^^go away herb..only explained, honest votes count!!
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good battle here............was feelin both verses........cept b.i.
pulls this one out........ breakdown opener - ib closer - ib vocab/complexity - tie dissing/personals - tie punches - tie flow - ib overall - ib........just a better verse....... cant poll..........not registered yet......... |
opener:BI
closer:Tie punches:BI structure: Tie vocab: Tie wordplay: Bi overall: BI spit, i seen you come a lot harder than this, BI had the peronsla, plz vote on the first battle in my sig |
MODS - someone voted for me on the poll - please give the vote to B.I.
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