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Sick, sick, sick rhyme...
In the spirit of some D12 shit...
I like kiddie porn, yo, I bet that makes ya fidgity... But I get my fill once a month, when the wife acts a little bitchy. I'll go down anyway, man, come up lookin like a vampire... I love the taste of blood, I'm the bank's # 1 buyer. Got me a dude on inside, he smuggles it out by tha quart... Have me a plasma milkshake, while I pick at my warts. I also like ta kill, poured serial over dozens of states... Don't matter who ya are, ya gonna soak up my hate. Stick a knife up in ya, move my hand like when I jerk often... Leave ya like my beat up car, leakin fluids and coughin. Then I'll violate ya corpse, stick my dick in every hole... But do it real quick, I don't like em when they cold. Cuz I'm warm hearted, at least when I'm cooking... Don't eat raw muscle, too hard for the chewing. But I will eat raw flesh, been a cannibal since my existence... Eat up every bit of ya, sop up the juices with bisquits. So beware when ya read, my typed words are a door... Read em once and I can get in, cold creep across ya floor. Then I'll have ya, palm of my hand kinda control... And if that palm is hairy, it's cuz I take care of my own. West's verse Toner's verse Explicitot's verse |
umm it was a ight piece flow was ok vocab ight multis and punches ight wordplay ight over all 6.5/10
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Thats 2 links...one more else this will be deleted..
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Hold on to your panties, Thugz...
You ain't gotta act all strict with me... You know I follow tha rules, man. Geez! |
^Why not strict..just felt like sayin that = ) ..
It was a point out, dont worry .. |
yo BTK, son i dont know what to say....ur just sick
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you the man always fresh with ideas graphic in thought makes me wonder why you dont take a step further you got a great indie pressence.
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Thanks for the feedback, peeps...
Much appreciated... And Word, my brother... A big thanks for that... I've never attempted to go further than writing... Cuz, quite frankly, I think my voice sounds like shit. Oh well. |
Graphic here,somewhat complex and twisted but intellectually done,vocab was descent,afew multi's and wordplay,good and different drop.
Peace |
very funny shit, good use of imagry and good multis and wordplay, keep this shit up dawg. 7.5/10
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well since i hate d12 and everything they spit, this really wasn't my thing, but hey look on the bright side, you are better then that fat guy in the group whatever his name is
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^^^^ Thanks, I think.
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yeah, its a compliment. Good imagery, check my 'fuck what ya heard' post
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this was a nice little verse
made me laugh a lot good wordplay and metas nice flow stayed on point mostly good read born anyway i know you are good with topics so go and hit up my open mic in my sig : untangible evil thanks man peace |
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