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skiddz aisle 5 and some other dudes shit and jimmyripper exempt from contempt i rip souls and bodies get condensed break ya defence, my rhymes take lives with deadly content let me vent, im hell sent with the rawest of purpose through my exertions ill bring more heat like *c to f* conversions me and my insurgents,will tear you of your physical with the residual occurence of these abominable rituals im phenominal and somewhat biblical, ancient in many ways bring knowledge like a college and smile whenever my mind spray my brain devestates, when i contemplate i seem to desecrate with intentions intent on breaking down all that you create mc's dissipate, im giving words a new meaning of danger they make you holy and weak like baby jesus in the manger im quick to anger, lone ranger on the prowl contagiously ill, yall feel me in your bowels my language foul, a dark dialect of this beast rhythm styles shine in different lights like reflections of a prism make incisions in times fabric, causes mental static an erratic savage live and breathe of the tragic emotions that your emotin', feral and potent hack into your body, just to glimpse all the components but i've always been there, you've always known it im you, your me, your devotions set free truth bears witness your sacred alimony to expunge all the guild, let loose with your soul and let splitsoul get the wheel under his controll :evil: oh yea... fooled ya, yall thought it was gonna be serious.... __________________ |
good to see you still got your flair for attention grabing and percise skillz.....you came ll in here with wordplay and twisting the subject matter....all and all this was illness all the way.
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I was definately feelin the flow in this piece some real hot internals but i did feel the content was lacking any real thickness. The rhyme scheme was very nice very smooth as far as a repetitive rhythm to it. overall this was a decent read
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Yeah i agree this was a pretty good piece here....enjoyed the read...flow in this was real good, stayed on point through out it and didnt really get off....you had some good internals in this, liked that...vocab was pretty nice in here too...overall good piece..keep at it.
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it was a ight piece flow and vocab was ight wordplay ok punches ight multi's ok over all 6.9/10
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