SiK WiT iT pt 2
 

Repped:
TheProphet777
SkiddZ
Masta C



I roll 30 deep to block-buster just to grab a movie
slit the clerks throat, dont even take the money just like his jewlry
who you tryin to fool-b, my shit aint elementry
first grade rappers are better then some main-stream ones
dont use my name in vein-like-a-phene does
MC's seem futile against me,brutile rhymes i spit off the dome
im so iced' my socks be chrome, i switch the subject more then mixer
i got rap-terets, just spit wats on the mind, like abrupt does
blood all over the ground, 1 sound the car pumpin in
the glock bumpin out, cats jumpin out, no doubt we killin sumfin'
u be willin to go surgicaly? or do we gotta letherigcally remove u off the street
without a beat, i take this kid to his feet, then to his knees
pull the heat out, and pull ~ i thought he was trusted
but he rushed me... 3 kids 3 knifes, 2 stiches?
no crutches, no lunches fed threw straws? u hurt me like new cats who cant use there paws...
im being sarcastic
faggots




rotten bodies in my basement, face-it, you've never even seen blood
u fainted when u saw ketchup on ur burger
further- more, im kickin in the door, pullin dropin to the floor
get a new whore, cuz she's red on the 8th, im spittin clips wit pace
without a trace? i rip shit then spit it out in ur face
I worship devils' to the fullest, hitler! hitler! fuck that bullshit
kid was pussy, lucky i wasnt a jew back then, i'd dare him to try n squish-my-family
im on the top of the tree - the key to the lock
the G' on the block, load the chamber - expload out wit a glock
2 of together, he goes to jail? judge gets a hit on his name-
till hes in the grave, we be riddddddinnnn forever
doin 187 on any local 7-11, haha that shit is crazy
pass it then blaze it, b
im high as a cloud in the sky - no lie, i could die, and still be spittin'
gettin ur mother smothered, then covered wit clips, blood drippin
and me sippin' on some wet-dead-pussy...
no lie white old ladies appeal to me,
fuck im hardcore...just to add more- i think the fans should know, how i keep the same flow:
I recycle my rhymes, 2 times, to better the enviorment, to get more illness used out of em...

This was alright here i thought....both of your structures could use a bit of work though, both of you had some stretched out lines, should try to keep them a little shorter than that...and try to add some multies into this to help out the flow...both of your vocabs were pretty decent could be up'd a bit though...but keep at it.

ooooooooooooooooooooo yea i had his name there by mistake heh

it was just me, that was a diff collabo in my notepad

if u dont know i got 2 split personalitys in here ;)

uppin 4 u bitches who got a pillow on ur head

it was good flow was ight wordplay ight vocab good punchlines ok multis ight over all 6.8/10

YO WUS UP LoCo.
THIS SHIT WAS TIGHT MY NIGGA, FLOW VOCAB, MULTIS, WERE ALL THERE. OVEALL A 8.9/10.

HIT UP THIS LINK AND DROP SOM FEEDBACK THX.
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your fuckin wordplay was bangin. the punches hit and the structure was on point keep that shit up dog.

Holla at em

thanks for reps

this was hot twin needs a little work but hey thats why we post to elivate i thought you were mia damn twin yo get with spike i want to see how you both collab togeather i think yall would come ill

honestly, i stopped reading tha shit on "i roll 30 deep to blockbuster to get movies" line, can't be too dope if you decided to type that shit in.

ya w-p was nice

Amen, are u sure this isn't SuK WiT iT pt 2???? really, dropp the gangsta image, it dont work on the net, to help u elevate, don't listen to anyother post before this one. Just go back to the drawing board