Tökën Vs. $pitacular (300+ Posts To Vote)
 

12 Line Max.
No D/R Votes.
No Hate Votes.
No Crew Votes.
You spit first and I shall spit when I can.

How about...

Crew votes allowed..
If you win you're allowed in..

They will vote on 2 categories..

Winner-
Should he be in-

Also..
Chrit, Axe, Aisle 5 and Walter Wall cannot vote

Is that cool? If not then we'll leave it as default.

agreed, checkin in and droppin:


yo check it,

Forget Rap, Fuckin you so Hard You'll Get "Signed" for a Porno Deal
You don't deserve to be a Leader, U lost to Brix And Born To Kill
Token has No Cash Value, only thing he's good for is Playin Games
Your crew lost a Great Emcee… other than that it just Stayed the Same
It's funny - you're scared to Spit first.. Just ask Aisle 5 (who will be killin U)
You're Dumb - thinkin the World is Numb… cuz Nobody's Feelin You
You couln't Throw a Punch If You Ripped Your Arms off & Tossed Em
All your Battles are History in the Making - cuz You Already Lost Em
Like a Lightbulb that no Longer Shines…. I leave you Broken Inside
Of course you can't See Me… It might help if you Opened Your Eyes
You can Have 100,000 Tokens and you'll still be Broke as Shit
Maybe if You Move to Las Vegas you can Elevate... to a Poker Chip

Death Arrives..

You're fired.. lonely (crewless) Like firemen on their way without hoes
Stabbed his cup holders and said he murders coast to coast
Begging to get in my crew.. Face it.. You got cut
Next time you spit a tryout.. Keep your mouth shut
Save the wackness.. Like Christian prison inmates
Yeah your skill level is going up, Like Heavens sin rates
Now I don't mean to be cold and I dont mean to be blunt
But you must be made by Wonka.. Because you're a chewable runt
I hate to be cold but the truth is you're pathetic
Saying you miss the crew and love me?..
..Not even Visa is giving you credit
After I make you famous you'll be put in the celeb morgue
Like Aisle 5 says.. Fall the fuck back..
..Like droppings of spinal chords

Death Leaves with a haunted mark..
aka Your 11th L..

:)

Breakdown.

Punches-tie
metas-token
Personals-spit
Word play-token
Multis-token
Creativity-spit
Overall-token

im impressed with spits verse, i still wanna battle him but i guess hes fit for the crew.
~1~

opener toke
closer toke
punches toke
personals toke
wordplay spit
vocab spit
overal toke

spit- ure lines are really long...shorten them down a biit

toke - wats with this new structure?...nope get gone with that

lmao..
Didn't try..
Especially the structure..

Not my real structure.. trust..

Thanks

Uppin 1...........

Nice Battle

Spit-His Verse Was Hot But Sentences Were To Long, But It Was Funny I Liked The Personals About Token And Punches His Verse Was Way Funnier And Shit
Token- He Started Hot Punches Were Original And Had More Hotter Personals About Spit About Droppin Him And Shit Which Made HIs Verse Hotter So I Liked His Better And Setup Was Wierd But O well
Vote=Token

since the two above ^^ are trying to get in your crew right now Toke, seems a little funny they rished to vote here for you...

and since you're swaying with the "lmao I didn't try" bullshit, let's talk about how I keyed mine real quick once the thread was up and you took almost two days to "key" your verse... just to be fair here

^ There we're even..
Emerge isn't trying to get in..

uppin 2...............

Don't ever accuse me of d/ring.......

my bad... you're right bout Emerge. and I didn't accuse YOU of doin the ridin... pz



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Aight ya both my dawgs and heres an Honest vote...
BREAKDOWN
Punches-Token..wittier
Personals-Token..Fire line was hot
Structure-Both
Flow-Both
Metas-Spit..altho Token had the hardest one i felt spit had more
Multis-wasnt a lot but $spit got this
Vocab-Both
Sustainment-Token..harder punches carried through
Complexity-Tie..nuttin between
Overall-Token..Harder punches mixed w/ personals won it

Fave Bars=

$pit=Forget Rap, Fuckin you so Hard You'll Get "Signed" for a Porno Deal
You don't deserve to be a Leader, U lost to Brix And Born To Kill

Token=You're fired.. lonely (crewless) Like firemen on their way without hoes
Stabbed his cup holders and said he murders coast to coast

Conclusion=
Token took this yes but why is every1 givin spit shit...he was in the original crew and wanted to get bk in and every1 dint wanna know...you cudda at least give him an honest answer and jus say you felt he wasnt good enuf for the new roster...personally i think he is..
but its a group decision and i respect ya'll vote...
jus dont bitch at him...he repped the crew to its fullest last time
i had only been here for a bit while black tie was on...and he was spreadin the name everywhere jus in that little space...
Moral is that he deserves more respect than that...
Speach over pzzzz

spit if you think i DR then dont count it plain and simple

i dont have beef with you...i dont like net beef its herbish

anyway if you dont like it then dont count it and that will be that:)

Forget Rap, Fuckin you so Hard You'll Get "Signed" for a Porno Deal
You don't deserve to be a Leader, U lost to Brix And Born To Kill
1st line is average..shudda been a set up for a doper 2nd line..but wasnt
Token has No Cash Value, only thing he's good for is Playin Games
Your crew lost a Great Emcee… other than that it just Stayed the Same
[b]Average again...dosnt hurt
It's funny - you're scared to Spit first.. Just ask Aisle 5 (who will be killin U)
You're Dumb - thinkin the World is Numb… cuz Nobody's Feelin You
2nd line is dope..lol nice punch
You couln't Throw a Punch If You Ripped Your Arms off & Tossed Em
All your Battles are History in the Making - cuz You Already Lost Em
1st = played...2nd = dope again
Like a Lightbulb that no Longer Shines…. I leave you Broken Inside
Of course you can't See Me… It might help if you Opened Your Eyes
average..1st line had the foundations for a dope punch but didnt deliver
You can Have 100,000 Tokens and you'll still be Broke as Shit
Maybe if You Move to Las Vegas you can Elevate... to a Poker Chip
Blah..average again...

You got 2 real nice punchs...the rest is average..iv seen you come harder than this

You're fired.. lonely (crewless) Like firemen on their way without hoes
Stabbed his cup holders and said he murders coast to coast
1st line = dope intro...2nd line = LOL
Begging to get in my crew.. Face it.. You got cut
Next time you spit a tryout.. Keep your mouth shut
blah...weak
Save the wackness.. Like Christian prison inmates
Yeah your skill level is going up, Like Heavens sin rates
lol nice 1st line..2nd wasnt to strong
Now I don't mean to be cold and I dont mean to be blunt
But you must be made by Wonka.. Because you're a chewable runt
lol funny but aint feelin it to much as a punch
I hate to be cold but the truth is you're pathetic
Saying you miss the crew and love me?..
..Not even Visa is giving you credit
average
After I make you famous you'll be put in the celeb morgue
Like Aisle 5 says.. Fall the fuck back..
..Like droppings of spinal chords
lol ok closer...cudda been better

[i]Start of verse is dopeness...the rest dosnt hit to hard but is nice i guees

Flow: S
Punchs: T...Coast to coast line..lol
Metas: Tie
Multi: Neither
Structure: S
Personal: T

Vote: Toke

those first few punchs won this battle