Where the net gets you. .
 

its fun, for nothing, try to make a future
a net-gangster? or sore mistake for loser
work w/ no profit. . & it gets no results
arguments that result in no blow at all
some kids see faith in their respect coming
like theyre getting a prize for net sonnings
but theyre not, its just lifes gifts decaying
laying hidden beneath their witty sayings
. .fuck the web, kids looking for much respect
beef here, beef there, its just the net!
needa calm 'em down, given a reason
they only get cockier if their image is seasoned
im risen in leisure, just to suceed at all costs
yall are falling in real life like prices at wall marts
. . closing out the competition
. . but the net makes lifes image swirled
i've found its better to be high in the business world
than to waste time, sinking to unworthy heights
to a point when kids think of surfing, its surfing sites
some hate, bitch, dont care what ya life image was
& most people hang on nuts & complain sumthin ridiculous
. . i bet they wouldnt d/r this much if they met ya
. . cuz you prolly wouldnt even fit their schedule
. . turn off the cpu awhile, ur times been enuf for one
& the net?. . dont take it serious, its just for fun .

you must LOVE cams structure... you use it well

topic approach was nice, decent vocab.... little piece of advice dont "net" rap
i.e. "w/" just to make your lines look same lenght...if they are too far off, reword the line and fix syllabul count

word, peep the sig gangster hoe 2pac for life fiya word dope

cam structure?
i dont believe that its HIS. i just think that its easier to read, and a lot more interesting than newb style :)

i apologize, good job here in case i didnt say so before

DOPE...
SIMPLE AS THat...
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