Nuclear Concepts Presents: We Da Illest
 

Repped:
DropZ
Word~P
Spikes

LoCo:
Ridilin controls are bodys, we should write a book on 'Ill For dummies'
Seems like we rap-zombies, dropin 6-8 ill rhymes a day.. fuck the obscuritys
Nuclear Concepts rolls threw 10 deep, wit 6 Ill MC's in the jeep' beef u goto sleep
4 behind makin sure we ridin straight,infinite soldiers on r side
and we havent begun to ride'
We run this shit like a marathon, i spit flames off the dome that be ill like a python
Wrap round your body, its bout time i've begun...
Im the strangest thug ull ever meet, when I rap i prefer no beat
i flow to the 'ohh'
Ima playa for life, if i ever make it out of the hood, ill come back next day - its normal for me in some way
But all you hata's I aint mad at cha, just glad that cha, gon' be clowned wen i snap at cha
Graspin on my rap-glock, slip a verse in the chamber, unload in ur brain.. its insane aint it
Grew up on Cabrni Green, hustlin since a youngin' 19 and im still sonnin, ive done-it
Came from the boddom, to the top of the tree top, fell and im still there (boddom)
But I dont care - wit a ill crew like Nuclear Concepts, fuckin up the Scrupria-Rejects
Vocabulary is pretty scary, aint it, never thought a thug' would carry a dictionary
The only time I recyle, is my rhymes, fuck the trees' and nuke the whales
Duke the G's and screw the phenes, its over wit, CENTZ finish it
Deminish it - this is off the dome, my time is over - CENTZ heres the microphone///

CENTZ:
you aint big enough to picture us even on id-
couldnt mimic our identities lip seeking our cd.
on karoakie- with my words in front of your face-
but the minute they're eraced your skillz are displaced.
NUCLEAR CONCEPTS is stronger...
a fight on mics aint battlen-
its just proof you aint phat but a(waist) of talent….
Like ( garbage men) college graduate...wait im wilden.
we been proved we the greatest thats in a past tence-
The world aint caught up to me yet... i hold the best presents.(present)
murdered all of you and if that doesn’t impress-
I’ll stop dropping bombs and drop a nuc till there’s nothing left.
I got doctors hunting me for being this ill-
With police manhunts for the rappers I killed.
It was just a battle it wasn’t supposed to be real-
But if that the case we’d all be fake so whats da deal?
Who’s hungry doesn’t depend on how you feel-
Its who end up ate and turned to a meal.
And since nobody bites our rhymes…
Or can eat these lines……I guess each battle is just dinner time.
we that nice… kid that’s why the adlibs are mellow-
Plus our play on words bello like shakespears’ Othello.
leave you half dead in a verse then in a hearst with the echo.
hell no my acapello be like mass homicide-
a serial killer of lyrics....
then the dictionary regardless if its revised.
There’s no revive once you’ve died-just hell-
Who ever thought they could win against us lied to themselves.

some nice shit here i think,.....the length of the lines in the first verse knocked the flow a bit, but still was decent, but i thought some of the vocab cold be touched on....i prefered the second verse,,it jus seemed to go better.........nice drop man...pZ

Yeah this was alright i thought....structure could use a bit of work since you had stretched out lines in the begining of this which threw off the flow in the begining like Deva said...vocab was alright in this could be up'd....could try adding some multies though...but keep at it.

im the second verse

yo this piece was solid my niggas you both came hard i think if locos bars woulda benn abit shorta it woulda flowed betta , but a good drop fom botha ya.peace.

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uppin for my fam loco