saw DOI diss... so i responded......
 

dopped feedback on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98133
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98142



well i was browsin about, an i was really bored, and thought what could i whip up, and the results.
peep the link first, and read their verses
[url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=98055Ha, Ha i seen this and just had to drop a reply

to potent
you droppin ya pants at site of ass, whilst we got 2 cents on grass,
i exerat a 'potent' lyricall mass, clear you in a biological blast,
workin out your punches like a solving 'riddle inside an enigma'
what the fucks he sayin?? he cant help it, its an everlastin stigma,
just like the man JIGGA, ya RB career should be totally 'HOVA'
the luck you need, to something like that of a four leaf clover,
all these imposters missed, but still gon wait for a full roster diss,
like 'stand'in up' without any legs, y'all punches is 'ludakriss'
aiight only 8 lines for this cat

to Edicus
you come from 'a dam' nasty plae, dick sees not enuff action,
a few crew formed together, so i have to divide up a faction,
postin picture of yourself, but not to reveal your pretty face,
after givin you a 'kickin' i tie ya up with the shoe lace,
you's 'playin' with deacons nut, more than all the rap game,
but like jay-z said on a bluepint 'some things never change'
you probably had the titest verse, but peeps gave it 9/10,
thats like forgettin the lions, when puttin daniel in the den.

to mystic mind/ Nlitend
they named this kid twice, so he has an alias to hide behind,
you gon pay the price, your death warrent jus been signed,
end lines 'wind an hint', this kid be spittin ill ryhmes at times,
infact, he brings a tear to my eye, because he tries an dies,
line, an line, out, an out, dawg you punches really hurt,
nah i was jus playin, they loose, like a fat joes tee shirt,
like teachers, on new subjects, im makin an example.
i've bin 'enlightened' my 'mystic'al mind' punches are ample,


to Eye Que
it seems that your name, has no reflection of your inner form,
dumb motherfucker, bars to start a castle, i think ya mind gone,
you talk about bars, the only ones that you grasp, all lather,
deacon asked you to collab, and mouth starts formin slather,(u know)
then you drop the verse you did, i wanna know what happen,
not sprize your lips of DEAC's cock, to even think bout rappin,
well i admit it. i propbs gave you my worst verse,
but im associated with more death than an hearse,

to Origin
'origin' your misin the fun, an group orgy, after that a DOI diss,
but what they dont know, out of there selevs they take the piss,
you can tell origin'ated from sperm, the resemblence is still there,
you want him, till he gets there, so ya leave him, an dont care,
well they cats verse was like the negative side of the battery,
so i flipped it, and positively left these cats scattering,
fuck origin

to Token
no 'token' of appreciation is given for participation, to you,
exposin u wackness is patronization, all RB, and my crew,
i thought you was a man, but ur like your punches, 'misses'(mrs)
i hurt more swallowin razors, an they come out when u pissin,
we's all x-rated, hang with you, you aint enough for the top shelf,
you with the comics, yous being supressed by my verbal wealth,
well you showered down the punches, but never needed to guard
smashed the DOI mirror, see youself, bleedin wen cut with shards,
well deacon organized his troops, you first to be sent south,(lol)
you in this army, doin more than one kind of drill, usin ya mouth.

to Deacon
In the DOI diss 1, you hid behind the true vets an went last,
it turned out all wrong, because on there u was outclassed,
i can see ya creative reply now, 'thinks he really james bond',
all these peeps dissin DOI, when they should stick to makin songs,
i should realy battle you, but a lotta dicks would come quick,
bitin so much, you'd arrive, a mouth fulla beef, an tooth pick,
but i break ya teeth, put an end to it, silence ya whole dream,
like axe. e ums avy, your texts seem to be broken on screen,
usin a connection to christ, 'deacon', but still 'GOD' aint blind,
when you mortal mind expires, only in the dirt will you reside,
you only 'present' you self to newbs, who wanna waste lines,
what happened, claimin that you is 'god' is a sign of bad times,

No...this wasn't that good. So many played punches, its like gameboy is a fresh system...sorry but...elevate

it wasnt that greaT BUT I DONT AGREEE WITH THERE BEING A LOAD OF PLAYED LINES I THINK THE VERSES WHERE JUST A LITTLE BORING OTHER THEN THAT IT WAS GOOD BUT THATS IT JUST GOOD I KNOW YOU ENOUGH TO SAY YOU COULD DO BETTER THEN THIS

hop off dick

then reply

it was pretty good. alot of context to work with and you made most of it work. Fuck the haters, The dis to origin and deacon were the best.

Holla at em.

Ya u show dem fukas neva to mess wit D.o.I, I dun agree wit da played lines either, they were hella tight, Ya iv seen betta from ya kuz but still bakin D.o.I. fresh kuz, pure fresh.... K33P It Kr@kIn yo

Pea¢e (\1/)050 5^

just wait for part 2 to come up....

DIE DOI...

anyways, its good that you stood up for your crew but it was pretty much played...at least you made an effort

it wasn't the best but i understand the reason ya did it......D.O.I Have some Sorter Hate Over Deacon Which I think is Pretty Childish but ya tried......it cought my eye some times but other times i drifted but all and all it was nice I enjoyed it peace man

^^^its what the internets for, i dont hate him, he an another rmember of my crew, dont seem to like each other.

i was jus messin around, cos i was bored.

thanks for the replies

nice man. i thought it was cool how you had a verse against everyone that had a verse against ur crew. it was like a
10 on 1. haha. going against the odds huh. thats tite. i like
kats like you. not takin shiet from no one. keep it up. i never
really heard of that crew till now. i dun see wuts wrong wit it.
anyway. nice drop. must've taken awhile.
peACE

i agree,

it took a few hours whilst i was surfin, it gave me sumfin to do

/\he is ducking me and scared to battle/\

007 this was worthless sorry man but played punches structure feel off at points....not good at all yo