mdizz vs ILLunatic
 

rules go like deez


10 Lines
You Spit First
No Feeding
No Biteing
No Recycling
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No D/R Votes


^^geez

Checkin In

Yo Homie
I Said You Spit First
So Go Ahead And Drop
I Will Sometime Tonight
Good Luck.....................

......lol damn i got nuthin

stop frontin is this kid pha real?
im battlin a lunatic, but its no life threatening ordeal
for me that is, shit i got u killt like irish males
howd he die so early in tha game? bitch i dont sweat tha minor details
wat ails ya..the executives back, tha last thing RB needs see-
dudes punches dont strike me as a threat, u aimin to please me?
too easy, exec. steez chokes themselfs like black tie
lunatic rolls wit tha only RB crew run by tha Token WACK guy
over breezy, tics stuck in tha losing bracket and i jammed gears
granted hes workin hard-
..cuz alls left after this throwdown is his blood sweat and tears

YOUR A BITCH!!!

if i woulda known ur werent gonna dropt for a lifetime i woulda took my time..fuck it i dun care u wasted my time

got damn horse plowing monkey uncle fucker ass nucca

LoL my bad homie
You didn't drop last time I was online
I've been busy
Basketball games and shit
I'm tired as fuck right now
I'll key tomorrow dont worry

See dizz ya got no production, ya rhymes need construction
Thats why i'm combustin, Fuck it, i got the win with just an Introduction
The win's already been laid out, Killa Instinks? Shit ya'll pussies just played out
This battle you shoulda stayed out, Like i'm Buffy ya'll juss got slayed out w/a fade out
Ya mind as well bow down like bow wow Cuz i'm hot now, No I wont stop now
Fuck wit Executives, Killa Instinks gone get popped now, Fuck it ya'll juss got dropped down
Eternally ripped on lyrical conflict, Ya couldn't despise me if ya was a hysterical convict
I constrict tha convict in conflict, Cuz Its time ta inflict on this Killa Instink who is Not Sick
Fuck a finisher i'll just stomp ya intestines, With no peace this kid is restin, cross dressin
Who was this kid testin, Fuck the blessin, I still gotta decompose that Bitch crew ya reppin

Alright this battle was alright, mdizz you had an alright verse but didn't really hit,
ill- your verse was a bit better had flow and some wordplay.. so i guess ill gets this one

v-ill

i think ILLunatic got this

his flow was OK...structure could be better for the both of you
both came with good punches but creativity and multies definately went to ILL

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Fuck 100 characters
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opening - ill
flow - neither
punches - both
metas - ill
multis - ill
wordplay - ill
closing - tie
overall - illunatic

UPPIN #2
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100 character bull shit!

stop frontin is this kid pha real?
im battlin a lunatic, but its no life threatening ordeal
for me that is, shit i got u killt like irish males
howd he die so early in tha game? bitch i dont sweat tha minor details
wat ails ya..the executives back, tha last thing RB needs see-
dudes punches dont strike me as a threat, u aimin to please me?
too easy, exec. steez chokes themselfs like black tie
lunatic rolls wit tha only RB crew run by tha Token WACK guy
over breezy, tics stuck in tha losing bracket and i jammed gears
granted hes workin hard-
..cuz alls left after this throwdown is his blood sweat and tears

flow...7
punches...6 childish
vocab...6
wordplay...6
structure..6
overall...31

See dizz ya got no production, ya rhymes need construction
Thats why i'm combustin, Fuck it, i got the win with just an Introduction
The win's already been laid out, Killa Instinks? Shit ya'll pussies just played out
This battle you shoulda stayed out, Like i'm Buffy ya'll juss got slayed out w/a fade out
Ya mind as well bow down like bow wow Cuz i'm hot now, No I wont stop now
Fuck wit Executives, Killa Instinks gone get popped now, Fuck it ya'll juss got dropped down
Eternally ripped on lyrical conflict, Ya couldn't despise me if ya was a hysterical convict
I constrict tha convict in conflict, Cuz Its time ta inflict on this Killa Instink who is Not Sick
Fuck a finisher i'll just stomp ya intestines, With no peace this kid is restin, cross dressin
Who was this kid testin, Fuck the blessin, I still gotta decompose that Bitch crew ya reppin

flow...8
punches..8
vocab...7
wordplay...8
structure..8
overall...39

illunatic...rip'd this kid....better everything..other guy didnt come prepared...

good luck 2the both of u

peace

vote..ILL

^^wont let me poll vote...

so if a mod see dis...he should be 4-0....

if its possible 4 a mod 2 change it or something

thanx peace

good lukc y'all

opener ILL
closer ILL
punches ILL
personals ILL
overal ILL

honest vote...yup


lunatic fix the structure doggie