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lyricalsolja vs. Meters
10-14 lines
blind spit spit by tomorrow morning, i'm a bit busy right now good luck man |
Yo they should call you CENTImeters,
cause ur dicks so small u hafta use tweesers, but thats what u get when u try to masterbate wit egg beaters, and i read ur last battles i dont know why ur 8-5, you blow so mutch its amazing ur still alive, i dont know how u survived, you fixina choke so hard on my dick ur gonna hafta get revived, cause my punch lines hit you like 1-2 in rapid time, im 0-2 and ill stomp u and im not even in my prime, yeah thats right thats something ill admit, no swallow the cum bitch dont spit, he still a student i teach u to throw a fit, u goin through puberty thats what its called pop that zit, you still a rookie in my book learn how to suck a dick! |
Cat's a lyricle Solja for the illiterate kamikaze/
Refer to you as princess DIE, and myself? The paparazzi/* 'cause i SNAP ya shoulder strap, while ya rhymes veer off track/ Even when ya hit the ground running, bitch still can't bounce back/* Convulsing like an anxiety attack, now begins ya descent/ I'd make an indent in ya record but you're batting 0 percent/* I'd like to repent unitl my lyrical spawn are withdrawn/ Thanks pawn, for bein' a walking advertisement for Paragone/* The way i have this no-name quartered, his name should be John Dough/ 'Cause my rhymes leave him indistinguisable, guess he never was though/* Meters spits poison venom like 100 perturbed basilisks/ Tired of throwin' punches, so like the Knicks i'm throwin' bricks/ Bitch, i know these lines are filler, for closure follow the asterisks/ (REFER TO LAST ASTERISK) lines 1-4-Kamikaze= suicidal soldiers. Princess Di(ana) was killed When paparazzi chased her car into an accident. When you hit the ground after being ejected from a car, you bounce. Bouncing back is coming back hard. lines 5-8 - He's won 0 battles. Phoeniix who is in my crew was also challenged by him and merked. Thus the advertisement line. lines 9-10- Quartering someone is tying there limbs to a horses and then having the horses gallop. The word play is dough with quarter and john doe with being quartered. John doe is an indistinguishable body. He's indistinguishable because nobody knows who the fuck he is. line 13- I JUST MERKED YOU BITCH! |
Solja I think you got potential but you should work on your choice of words to play with and structure..I'm new, from what I have seen, the voters want to see people get defamed..with no remorse, keep that in mind next time you spit. Keep postin'.
Meters got the W...due to word play and structure. One negative, I don't dig explaining your verse. The rules say 10- 14 lines and thats it. If the concept is to hard to figure out I don't think you should spit it...Good battle...peace.... |
overall wak battle but meters go this
create/met punches/met personals/met wordplay/draw flow/lyrical rymescene/draw open/none close/none vocab/met meta/draw multi/draw vote/met (((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( ((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((())))))))))) )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))))))))) |
uppin for votes.
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ahhh, i'm kind of ashamed of this battle. vote on it so i don't have to think about it anymore. drop a link and you'll get a vote.
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*VOTE AND DROP YOUR LINK*
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VOTEEEEE!!!!
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upping for votes............
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meters got this 1
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^ lol at the vote...
vote - Meters the way he worded it was way better than his opponents, I didn't see a sense of punchlines visible, but the verse structure and vocab and references were pretty dominate 2 me. so overall, Meters gets the vote. vote for this in return, the both of you. cannabarz vs gazeebo thanx... |
Can't poll but this will up your thread: Vote meters
three words... I got it. i didn't feel you had to explain your verse. the punches and metas were strong and stayed relevent. that's the difference betwwen the 2. Lyric has potential but his punches missed at times. no hatin or d/r |
meters got it................................................ ................................................
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punch-met
meta-met vocab-met flow-soulja consistency-soulja vote-met but the last part really sucks met. try to be more consistent. |
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