Homocide - Feedback
 

Check out da track Homocide, I dont really feel the delivery on the verses, but maybe im trippin. I need an opinion from yall professionals here at rb! lol . let me know what you think. Thanks

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/o...ctionsmusic.htm

hmm...
 

i don't think it's great or anything, you could work on your lyrics, but at least you have your own sort of style.