J Miles VS Canuck
 

5 barz=10 lines
no crew
u drop first
I'll drop when ur done

This was copy'd and paste'd from the other thread


To J*Miles for want'n me to spit 1st.
"Feed of Me. Cuz You ain't stroooooooong...
You need a friend. Someone to carry you ooooooooon...
Miles. It won't be loooooooooong....
Before you gon see....what it feels to be boooooooooooombed.."


Here we go:

I'ma drop dis verse first, like quench'n the worst thirst//
this taylor-made sip'n hatorade, gonna wish I didn't dispurse 1st//
my biological structure ruptures your weak thought pattern//
Ill-logical shots splatter'n ya leave'n ya distraught'n batter'n//
it don't matter when, don't think, just drop that shit proper//
cuz you come wacker than any Inc., you phoney Hip-Popper//
Pray'n for guidence, ya need some assistance from above//
persistance shows Violence, jus cuz it's christmas don't mean show love//
Took me 5 mintues, to dig you a fuck'n grave//
next time listen to my limits, cuz yo I figured you fuck'n cave//

:VOTE:

I’m bout to call this nigga “avant” cause his body gettin “separated”//
I’ma have this nigga “unable to continue like his body has been sedated//
I’ma smoke this canadian quicker than Oswald did mista kennedy//
I spit nuttin but “intellectual” thoughts like my “I.Q” is at infinity//
Sorry kid ya aint winnin u want something to “beat” juss grab ya “dick”//
Put “7” bullets in ur stomach so u can wear “red”on ya chess like “mike vick”//
I leave this nigga “staggerin” like it’s a Friday night and he drunk 2 many “malts”//
Put Canucks brains on tha “sidewalk” so he can have a “solid” thoughts//
Have this wannabe emcee wit his body parts entirely missin there flesh//
This nigga tried to complete the “challenge” of beating me but fail the “test"//

Nice Drop (it's about time)

Upp'n for votes. .................................................. ............................

uppin 4 votes on dis shit(1)
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Battles been up for an hour, and still NOT ONE VOTE.

btw....jus upp'n bitch'n and well.............upp'n

i was feelin both of these verses...nice battle for both emcees...

canuck had the better wordplay and meta's...
but J*mile's flow was fire to me...he just made me bop my head to his punches...
however, canuck's punches just hit harder to me...J's were kinna generic.

VOTE- Canuck

mettas-JM
punches-Tie
multies-C
vocab-C
Wordplay-none
flow-Can

Vote-CANUCK
Canuck came a lil harder
thas my Vote Take I Or Leave It

Drop A Fair Vote Please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98529

::wUn::

aight.

Canuck= 2
J*Miles = 0

thx for the str8 votes. Can this battle end today please. thx.

Keep Vote'n.

if u dont got enough posts then dont vote cause ya'll dont know how....ya'll juss go by what others say so quit ya freepostin in here

flow-j miles
entertainment-j miles
punches-j miles
structure-j miles
rhyme-j miles
personals-tie

vote-j miles
~peace~

hit up one of my battles

J totaly dominated this shit; no hate to cancuck but i gotta give it all to j miles. can't vote but i'd give it to j

good drop

uppin 4 votes in dis shit(2)
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it was a quite closely fought battle, but i have to give the overall thing to cancan. i believe he did an exquisite job making dem rimes, but j miles had some nice "flow".................................................. .................................................. ...........................

And da score is:

Canuck = 3
J*Miles = 1

Kepp at it peeps, break the votes down a bit better....................