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Tökën Vs. EnVy Ny
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No D/R Votes. No Have Votes. Axe, Chrit, Walter Wall, and Aisle 5 Can't vote.. Crew Votes Allowed since we both an Executive.. Good luck homie. |
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*His sons name is Mario*
*His custom title says KING* Alright i'm ready now... Like minimized memory banks.. Your mind has small value ..You'd think I was a cannible the way i'll Disembowel you I'll smack the crown off your head and put you in place ..Your life will end up darker than the race of the slaves I'll dethrone this King and place a crown of thorns on his vain head ..And kill all your thoughts of W's and declare you brain dead Hey dad! How's Mario handling being the son of a goomba? You'll end up betrayed by him.. ..Because you're King.. And in the end Mario slays Koopa I've been cutting your ass... And I don't even own a knife So i'll place a period at the end... ...Just to boldly mark the end of your life. Your life has ended.. *bows head* |
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Tyme 2 Earn My Respect My Mans Started A Crew Of Nuttin But Rookies Start Keepin Ur Thoughts Inside Like Fortune Cookies Call My Punches Leggo's The Way I Leave Ur Brains In The Block Only Token He Got Is >1 Way 2 My Cock Ill Throw Ur Corpse Off The Bridge So U Can Fall~ 2~ Pieces You Stuck On Ur Comp More Den Blood 2 Leeches BeaT Token Up Wit Pipes Cuz Now He Wanna Be In ~Sink (Nsync-Together) Tokens Home Security Blowing Up Still Wouldnt Put Him In A Brink Like Cookie Jars Round Fat Bitches U Gonna B Left Hollow N Topless Even If U Was My Hat U Still Couldnt Top This Shut Down Mouths...... |
Opener: Token
Punches: Envy Personals: Token Wordplay: Tie Vocab: Neither stood out too much Flow: Token Structure: Envy Closer: Damn this one was close but ima give it to Token Overall: Close battle but I think token came out on "top" |
nice battle..... best one i've read today
punches-close....envy personals-token opener-token closer-token......nice....envys...was good too flow-envy wordplay-envy.....by a lil creativity-tie... damn close battle..... but im give it to envy....cuz of punches and wordplay hit this battle up plz.......i took tha time on yours...peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98469 |
I dont think this was very close at all.....
to be honest...token came very weak in my opinion- I saw his verse before envy even dropped an i said to myself... "hmmmm envy gonna have to screw up big time to lose this one" Infact i was right and wrong at the same time..... He didnt screw anything up...at all...which made him pretty much run away with this one.... he had better personals,flo,meti4's and wordplay- I was expectin a good battle here....but token choked.... Maybe next time...... vote- envy ny |
Like minimized memory banks.. Your mind has small value
Decent wordplay, ok punch ..You'd think I was a cannible the way i'll Disembowel you Nice wordplay, no punch at all I'll smack the crown off your head and put you in place Nice personal ..Your life will end up darker than the race of the slaves Eh...so so wordplay, not much of a punch I'll dethrone this King and place a crown of thorns on his vain head So-so personal, some unecessary filler, weak punch ..And kill all your thoughts of W's and declare you brain dead It rhymed, that's about it. Couldn't see tha wordplay or punch Hey dad! How's Mario handling being the son of a goomba? Good personal, nice punch You'll end up betrayed by him.. ..Because you're King.. And in the end Mario slays Koopa Good wordplay, kinda weak cuz it's video games, so, decent punch I've been cutting your ass... And I don't even own a knife So i'll place a period at the end... ...Just to boldly mark the end of your life. Ok wordplay, decent closer, but really, no punch My Mans Started A Crew Of Nuttin But Rookies Nice personal, but a self punch cuz it's your crew too Start Keepin Ur Thoughts Inside Like Fortune Cookies Nice wordplay, but no punch Call My Punches Leggo's The Way I Leave Ur Brains In The Block Good wordplay, again, no punch Only Token He Got Is >1 Way 2 My Cock Decent name diss and wordplay Ill Throw Ur Corpse Off The Bridge So U Can Fall~ 2~ Pieces Eh wordplay, mild punch You Stuck On Ur Comp More Den Blood 2 Leeches Could have used an explanation (post count?), kinda played meta, so-so punch BeaT Token Up Wit Pipes Cuz Now He Wanna Be In ~Sink (Nsync-Together) Good wordplay, Nsync is pretty played though, decent punch Tokens Home Security Blowing Up Still Wouldnt Put Him In A Brink Good wordplay on Brink's, good punch Like Cookie Jars Round Fat Bitches U Gonna B Left Hollow N Topless So-so wordplay and meta, kinda played concept, but nice twist, decent punch Even If U Was My Hat U Still Couldnt Top This Played! There's the real deal right there... Envy barely takes this, but does cuz he simply connected more and harder. Peace |
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Pretty Good Battle From Both Of You I Gotta Say, Token Threw Lots Of Personals At EnVy But EnVy Had Alot Of Wordplay And A Few Personals Himself, BUT A Majority Of His Wordplay Was Old Which Took Away The Effect Of His Punches Opener - EnVy Ny (Bastard, LoL) Closer - Token Punches - Token Personals - Token Vocab - EnVy Ny Structure - Token Overall - Token Got This In My Opinion With Just Better And Up To Date Hits Vote - Token Sorry I Cant Poll You Guys But Fuck It |
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Envy Ny won this.
Reasons, Token came dissapointingly weird, I was expecting something more for some reason, I'm cool with you Token, I just guessed you had a bad spell, But Envy came with some good wordplay, one or two nice meta's, Flow was equal by both, Pz |
yo i think envy took this because of better punches flow wordplay and metafors
the fortune cookie line was nice lmao and to token...u had better personals but u could do much better than that no hate my vote goes to envy ny i took the time so please return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99542 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99309 thanks good battle |
envy got this shit yo .....token no hate ur verse was good...But checking his profile about mairo or something was very obvious....Should have targeted him more than his bio....And games....
Envy...Very good personals....The hate line killed this siht... my vote goes to envy.... Can yall up this battle its being slept on NO HATE VOTES! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99337 |
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