Baby Boi vs. Rule
 

lets go 15 - 20 lines

lets get this shit poppin.

check in man..............................................
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is rule a no show?
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i don't know .................................................. ....................
............................. he need check in by an hour man or forget it

yo i have a life..it's a saterday...heres my fuckin verse now drop

Damn i read your profile 38 posts a day thats pitiful
Take it your a disliked fagget an unwanted individual
Claimin you finally got compitition...what do I posses?
Ya goin against a vet kid thus W? your still very hopeless
Joined RB this month feelin lucky cause of christmas
Heres a cross i'm leaven you hung like fuckin jeezus
I'ma unrap this bitch strangle em in his turban...fuckin hindu
Act irration pull a hitler go comacoze an kill this pitiful jew
This battle verse better be ya testiment cause you're parished
My words cuttimn you up like glass w/ hit by diamond carrots
C'mon an through something significant at me don't stutter
Scared cuz ya playen the rule now die mother fucker
Line after line it's slicen ye throught like a switch blade
Cause rock a by bitch this battles a cradle to e grave
You style change but you go for gay men homosexual
Sayin I like different races..that don't make you bisexual
Stupid fuck stop playen this game like your a thug
You broke the rules now go to the heavons above
Why you comen at a vet your still a baby boy
Didn't your mommy warn you about certian toys?
Some your just not ready to occupie this isn't a rattle
I'm a work horse...young'n you just feel off this sattle

spellin mistakes...e---ye, and feel is suppose tobe fell*

-----------------spit your verse............................................. .............

through--throw*, throught---throat

i made a lot of spellin mistakes....cuz 2pac r-i-p bitch rushed my ass cuz i have a socaial life and was out on a saterday....herb drop your verse so i can merk your sorry ass

You call yourself the "rule" but you softer than "Ja"/
Ya "potentials" on E, as ya battle wins begin to flop/
Dissapointed in ya effort, all u could come up with in 6 hours/
Too late ur devoured, that shit was softer than flour/
I scared u to "yesterday", spinnin backwards like beyblades/
ya couldn't "focus" that much, ya light was covered with lampshades/
Tried to correct ur mistakes, shoulda fixed ya whole damn verse/
Spelling's not ur problem, ya whole wordplay's the worst/
Im quenchin ya thirst, ya brain cells bout ta burst/
my killa instincts emerge, i shoulda went first/
yo moms the one that warned me rule, i just gave er the dick/
i slit her lips with just a fist, her pussy talks with a lisp/
Call me the common cold, but my rhymes heats you like sweaters/
i've proved this babies better, im'll go and learn my letters/
Baretta's what i endeavor, now im labeled as your shredder/
this baby's hard as leather, but rule is soft as feathers/

the "yesterday" part comes from him saying its a saturday.

opener: Rule
closer:Tie
punches: Rule
structure: Tie
vocab: Rule
wordplay: Tie
overall: Rule


aiight
nice battle peeps.
but rule is just too good
An i thought you would be battlin some better peeps than this rule??


PLZ DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS BATTLE SEEMING HAS I HAVE TAKEN TIME TO VOTE ON YOUR
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98764

oh shit it is sunday aint it.....im'a dumb ass...lol...................fucker got me there....pz...thanks for the vote

punches: tie
structure: baby
vocab: tie
wordplay:baby
opener-rule
originalitybaby
final vote baby

nothing personal but tom me he just came a bit harder anyway good battle keep it up.

that is funny. lets get some more votes though......................
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i think baby boy took it


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should be 2-1 but oh well thanx yall...................................
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whatever mayn took you all day to prewrite lol.....herb...................................... ....................................