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The Shook One Responds (cr0nix diss)
Repped:
Rule ChokeDogg LA 4LYFE The Shook One rules this shit, like a president Im the owner, your just a resident I know you've heard of us (Nuclear concepts), we the RB.Com herb murderaz' Im makin dough, while you tryin to start net-beef I levitate-haters wit shells, I dont hesitate-wen-merkin-fakers Im reliniqushin you from the rap-section, ur statchitory like detention He's gettin some recognition, cuz look i mention the name cr0nix He's still learnin his Ebonics, cuz he's hooked-on-the-phonics Illiterit idiot, havin his dad readin my diss's The white moron, has spoken (cr0nix) spirit is broken He's steppin up & choken, like a D.U.Ier tryin to get a license, ur played verses r revoken Im slopen this shit like MT Everest, no one makes the climb Ur 'jabs' hurt me like a feather-fist, so he's harmless I could throw better 'punches' at G's, if i was armless My chamber-is-loaded, like a m80 i've exploaded Makin 'this gangsters' neck emploaded, quit rippin my spits, and showin em You've grow from an idiot, to a complete dumb-fuck But ill hand it to you, some of your rhymes are dope, but its just some-luck Ill cut you from head-to-toe, unlike you, im like a pencil, I got lead-to-show Gimmie a street-1on1, I guarntee, like the french you retreat-son U'z a straight up pussy, go cover ur clit(body) wit a tampon Bitch... |
upp
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yeah man quite liked this some good vocab and multis, but ya dont need to highlight them...we know what they are...lol....keep reppin man...pZ
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thanks for the positive feedback... upp
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UPP WAT THE FUCK TAKE THE PILLOW OFF AND STOP SLEEPING
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omg upp
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Yeah this was alright i thought...some lines were kinda stretched out a bit but nothing big...you had some good multies in this like Deva said, liked that...vocab was pretty good as well...but overall this was alright...keep at it.
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ya it was good
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upp
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