~\True-Love/~
 

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7968#post987968


Been through loves most aggresive anger
I'll always love u its kinda tough being a romantic gangsta
I sit down in this harsh word to think about Loves lessons, love is neither aggressive nore jeaolous, u and my son are my greatest possesions
Damn its kinda sad how i lost my boo, but baby girl 3 words describe how I feel "I-LOVE-YOU"

some quick short poetry keystyle

short but still sweet.. i think u should keep it goin it'd prob be pretty decent..simple but nice structure..u could improve the vocab tho...keep it goin kid..i like this..lata..

yea i did this in couple minutez and i just posted is just a lil piece thnx for the feedback resp.

this was short and simple. a pure vent, made of emotions and not much else. with a piece layed down so simple and straight forward theres not much one can say on them. them message was simple, but strong, and i felt you did a good job showing why u feel that way. it would be a good piece to add on and expand.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

thnx........

it was straight cuz but it was a lil short
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