Walter Wall vs. B.I.Detained
 

10 Lines
you spit first......ASAP
no feeding, biting or recycling
no hate or d/r votes
good luck

shit walt i jus got the message...
this is my check in.....
i'll get a verse down asap...pz
good luck too..

Walters feeling Circumcised & begs me to prey for him...Shalom!!..
..i respected you at one point,until you asked for slips w/ Talon
like a Paralysed RaceHorse..you're in for an Agonising Ride..
coz they Collapse at the 1st Post..guess they kinda Bonafide
how can you Stand up..you've got no Foundations at All..
..like a Descelot Decrepit house..you Cave in Wall-To-Wall
by parading your Records..du think its sum kinda Retribution..
it dunt make you Look Textwise..you look more like X-Ecution
couldnt Use a Personal,I checked..you're a Fist of Used Metas
i Wrtiten and Stamped all over you..ya still cunt produce Letters(lol)

Wow 11 wins, egos big as a balloon, watch me puncture
I peeped ya rhymes, theyre straight.......as ure structure
Whin'n to Aisle 5 about vet status, why?
ure career here is shorter...............than my previous line
Ruin'n dis newbies streak, I'm bleach to ya tighty whities
This battles a landslide, B's on top right? Naw, just his ip
Ure crews not dope, it's a joke; a game, check the Token
Ya los'n 4-0 to feeble, it's kinda like ure skills.....hopeless
Ya punch wouldn't be connected if u was a siamese twin
Now Im a cut you in half..............and it B. I. with the win

upp'n
for
votes!

Vote
it
up
peoples

nice verse Mr.Wall
uppity up
__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____

good battle...heres how i broke it down

opening - Walter
flow - both
personals - both
punches - Walter
vocab - B.I.
multis - None
metas - walter
closing - B.I.

Overall:

Walter Wall = 3/8
Detained = 2/8
tie/none = 3/8

My Vote - Walter Wall

close battle...nice verse by both of you

Favorite Lines Of The Battle:

Whin'n to Aisle 5 about vet status, why?
ure career here is shorter...............than my previous line
__________________________________________________ __

can both of u please hit up the battle in my sig wit an honest vote

thanks alot

^to
the
top

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98207

^^^heavily slept on ...needs honest votes....



opener+1-B
closer+1-W..nice
punches+2-W
personals+2-B
wordplay+1-blah
multis+1-blah
complexity+1-W
originality+1-B
best line+1-W..shorter than last line..nice
consistency+1-W
cornyness-2-blah
enjoyment+1-W

overall....B.I.Detained (+4)...Walter Wall (+7)----winner no hate...now go vote honestly on my battle...!!!!!

opener - Walter
flow - tie
personals - tie
punches - Walter
vocab - B.I.
metas - walter
finisher - B.I.
Overall - walter

pretty good battle.. but walter takes it in my opinion.. overall better verse

upp'n
for
votes

opener: B.I.
Punches: Walter
Personals: B.I.
Best Punch: Walter "Whin'n to Aisle 5 about vet status, why?
ure career here is shorter...............than my previous line"
creativity: Walter
closer: Walter

Overall = got to give it to Walter

No beef, good drop by both

upp'n
for
the
last
time

damn good battle

opening - B.I
flow -B.I
personals - both
punches - B.I
vocab - B.I
multis - None
metas - walter
closing - walter


if i could vote i would vote B.I

vote on this battle honestly...........................


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97818