Bugz-Bunny vs. Wrapp3d G1ft
 

15 lines max
no hate
dr
crew
feeding
biting
none of that shit

i'll spit soon

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mods can u close this? this nigga gonna no show
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Pussy Pussy Pussy

checkin in.... sorry i had things to do today.... I don't no show....
Peace_____________------------------______________.................

kid thinks he has the 'gift of rap' but hes wack as shit//
n he gotta have a 'virus' for his rhymes to be 'sick'//
i wus feelin you for a minute there i have to admit//
but comparing 'you to me' is like comparin 'punches to hits'//
when you battle punches come harder then stupid fukin kicks//
this aint 'karate' this is the 'marshall(martial) art of spits'//*
from the look on your face i know your 'not ready yet'//
n i wouldnt try to rhyme cauz i just 'murdered the alphabet'//
I live in philly at least im proud of where i come from//**
cauz im not from the land of 'sadam the dirty bum'//
n as of now im bout to make your muthe fukin record 0-2//
your so whack even if you 'caught the west nile' i still no cats iller than you//***
Closer
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after i lyricaly 'kill' you, you wont have to 'live' in fear//
i just murdered my christmas present, i guess i wus bad this year//****


k yo i thought this was an ok verse not my best....
martial arts is karate, and marshall is marshall mathers or eminem....
**i doesnt tell you where he is from
***the west nile is a virus or 'illness'
****his names wrapped gift so its 'present' as in gift....
Eays enuff right!?

I spit fire and flame, just try to refrain, note that Im gonna bake you...
They should call you childrens Advil cause my little brother could take you...
Calln me pussy...wen ur more "beat" than a cheap slut/
Dawg it sounds like ya rymes go in frum ya mouth n out ya butt...
i sufocate ya flow, Have you spittin salivia..
I light up ya mouf but u still aint blazin fia...(fire)
Ya wack...u waste of G1fts tyme u needa hit up boot-camp...
N ya cant do it, like a wheel chair facialty wit outta ramp..

yo wrapped gift had this joint, like baby advil my little brother could take you, lmao, ahhahahahaha

VOTE=WG

uppin 1 lmao high definition you need to explain ur vote even if u cant poll it asshole dont freeepost ThanX Uppin1
Peac3______________--------------------_____________................

bugz took this battle with better flow,and sturcture. wrapp u did have that sic advil line but one line can't win it for ya.....

my vote...bugz


vote on this battle.................................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98116

ite ,

rite this is how i saw this,

flow=buzz
structure=bugz
punches=gift
personals=bugz
enjoyment=tie
creativity=tie

close shit but bugz got this.

put an honest vote on this now as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3126#post993126 ..................................pz

Breakdown:

Punches: Bugz
Flow: Bugz
Creativty: Bugz
Vocab: Niether
Enjoyment: Bugz
Opener: Bugz
Closer: Bugz
Personals: Bugz

Overall: Bugz

One sided as fuck...a'ight battle, Bugz got some skillz...

Plz, plz, plz, hit this up, dawgz...bein slept on hardcore...thx...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3165#post993165

cmon man i took the time rite this is how i saw this,

flow=high
structure=tie
punches=high(fucking insane lol)
personals=high
enjoyment=high
creativity=tie

good shit pro try include more personals,

put an honest vote on this now as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3126#post993126 ..................................pz ..................pz

punches:both (kinda played)
personals:bugz inched this one out
flow:gift
structure:bugz
meta4's:tie
creativity:bugz
overall:bugz (both need to keep elevatin)

^soz man wrng battle.lol ne way vote on my shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3126#post993126 .thx...........pz

I'm a give this to Bugz for a more balanced attack.

Wrapped came fucking nice, really nice in that opener...

Then completely fell apart.

It almost looks like the 2 opening lines were written for him, then he took over the rest...

And fucked it all up.

Seriously, the structure is even different.

He's got those two almost perfect lines...

Then everything after it is simple and filled with, ", /, and () bullshit.

Anyway...

Steady, decent punches from Bugz, decent wordplay, decent flow.

Nothing amazing, in fact he needs ta elevate...

But he kept it comin with the shots and flow.

KILL THE COLORING OF FONTS, THOUGH!

Bugz

Holla back...