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Anotherlevel vs. Blak woods
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10-15 lines all main rules drops in 15 min :thefinger |
15 min is up baby.... where you at... i'll drop right afta you and i mean right afta you.... if you drop .................................................. .......................
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ayo,
many cats fuck up and step up to da plate// 99% fake, and this bitch... fa heaven's sake// please sit back down, i'll murder yo ass comlpetely// retreat g, you fooled ya'self, I slice you up neatly// you get bashed and beat, obliterated and fucked up// you ANOTHA LEVEL beneath a good mc and remain to be stuck, WHAT// to bad the way you get tore up and hit on// must have pulled these lyrics oout my ass, cause i shit bombs// by the time i'm done, i'll leave ya punk ass heated// or problay cryin, shattered, lifeless, defeated// so,da next time you chose an mc ta beef,betta choose good// cause this ma fucka leave you stranded in blak woods// too bad we was supposed to drop at da same time... but you want a chance to retalieateagainst what i say... bitch... rock da vote ma niggaz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98069 |
this nigga think i ran i was just on a break
i'm bout to eat this nigga up like a sirlione steak i take the cake so wat he mean he da fein i come of clean an i'm bout to deliver nuthin but facts cuttin down black woods wit my lyrical axe don't relax or i'll give u reason to admire go to black woods and start a fire sellin rhymes i got a buyer and it's u the same person as last time black woods tryin to steal my best line but u still can't rhyme nigga u pathedic ur rap game need an expereinced medic ya i said it ur week an i'm at my lyrical peak fame is wat u seek but u shouldn't meddle never was for u to rip anotha level |
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Pretty Close..
I'll give it to Blak Woods just for staying consistent with punches and staying on topic. While Anotherlevel you need to enhance your vocab and lengthen your lines just a little bit.. but not too much. Work on metas and wordplay both you. Vote- Blak Woods http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99511 |
need some votes
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Aiight........
Opener-Blak Punch's-A Flow-Blak Structure-Blak Wordplay-tie vocab-blak Closer-blak Overall-blak Vote-blak He gets my vote as an overall he took dis battle!!.......nice job!.........try harder nexttime! 0n3 |
need some more honest votes
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need some votes on this battle ppl... come on i vote too.....
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ite blak gets this cause he hit with punches most of the time wereas the otha dude didnt that simple.blak work on ur structure still looks abit of but.
a-n work on structure also it was bare man.hit harder with punches. hit this up now plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...046#post1030046 .....................now............thx........... ..pz |
this battle goes to blak because he came stronger and his punches connected and shit and his closer was ok. another (nice avy)you came not as good, but with some good punches and shit
vote - blak return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101623 |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...046#post1030046 cmon man i took the time ..............thx...........................pz
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