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...OpeY... 12-15-03 09:11 PM

verbal conflict vs. Tha illest alive
 
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Topic: Lost in Translation

verbal conflict 12-15-03 11:57 PM

check....

Tha illest alive 12-16-03 03:41 PM

check...

Tha illest alive 12-18-03 05:04 PM

aight yo.....
qualitys kinda blah didnt have time to mix...
and plus i'm gettin a cold so voice is messed up a little.......
in otha wordz thrown together real quick.....

only song on page....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/t...tlivinmusic.htm

verbal conflict 12-18-03 10:48 PM

my shit didnt come home yet, so its still bad quality...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/v...ctionsmusic.htm

Tha Duce 12-19-03 08:31 AM

The Illist alive -
came good sounds like he is comfortable behind the mic and had good lyrics wit decent delivery audio qualty was not the greatest but we pritty decent. Like your voice. the only thing I have a problem wit the quality is its pritty flat sounding. need some more dyanmic but its clean sounding. so over all is a 8 out of 10

Verbal Conflict -
OK quality is a lil less than Illist. but there is not any cliping and very lil airy sound. so that is decent. does not sound like your comfortable behind the mic. sounds like your forcing it. and not feelin the beat. also your sounding flat too. and a few times it sounds like you messed up and you should have retaked thous parts. aight I give this a 6 out of 10

Vote goes to The Illist Alive

.:FiorZ:. 12-19-03 11:20 AM

my vote goes to tha illest alive....

his lyrics were tight and your voice was flowin well with tha beat....
u used da topic well and came up with a tight piece....
the delivery was on fire and flow was nice....
it had a nice length to it and was gud to listen 2....

no hate to verbal cos his verse was nice but i think da length proved to be decicive.....
tha illest alive used all the time he had available and he made a gud piece.....

peace

RahWerk. 12-19-03 11:50 AM

Tha illest alive:

(Listening) - Beat is coo, old school type of beat.. Hmm..Your flow is very dope, i like it..But, it seemed like u stalled a few times, and couldn't find ur next line... I can understand you fine. Stayed on beat, few times fell off..Your presence if fine..Breath control is coo..The ending is coo, added more emotion...This was nice..Overall a good track, ended nicley, lyrics were nice..Maybe, you lacked in delivery, and in, emotion..But, nice..

7.3/10.

verbal conflict:

(listening) Hmm.. You mumble words.. Flow seems to be on point.. Yeah, quality is a bit whack, wasn't feeling ur track that much.. Beat was coo, on some wu tang shit.. Wasn't feeling ur lyrics much.. Dlivery needs work.. Emotion was allright..

eh, it was ok, a lil below average. 5.8/10.

Vote: Illest.

M.O.C 12-19-03 01:57 PM

aight

Illest:
- coo shit nice beat
- tight flow but sumtimes it seemed u stressed words to fill measure
- cool way to deal wit the topic (war for freedom)
- quality was okay
- mic presence is aight but sumtimes u been a bit more quiet than the beat

Verbal:
- aight cool way to deal wit the topic sumthin I expected (languages)
- flow was off sumtimes
- quality was aight
- funny beat
- u lack a bit of emotion it's all the same after a while

I give this one to Illest cuz of better flow and better emotional thing
vote=tha illest alive

was close
coo battle
peace

Joebird 12-19-03 06:18 PM

Verbal - like the beat. its hard to understand you sometimes. i like ya voice on the mic though. the story was pretty tight. i liked it more than Illest's.

Illest - nice flow. you stay on point. dont like the beat. story is aight.

i gotta go with Verbal. Illest had a better flow but i thought Verbals story made up for it. peace.

vote: Verbal

Conflicting 12-19-03 07:59 PM

My vote goes to illest alive. his delivery was nicer. verbal seemed to mumble words too much and his voice sounds flat. verbal needs to work on sound quality big time. so does illest alive but it was way better than Verbal's track. I had to force my self to listen to Verbal.

13th Disciple 12-19-03 09:42 PM

*listening*

The illest Livin:

nice beat....followed wit good flow so far...actually this is pretty
good...seriously...i'm kinda impressed...i never heard ur shit
before but this is good....


Verbal Conflict:

ooh...kinda hurtin my ears...nah i'm not really feelin this at all
dunny...no hate just being real...


Vote-Illest

*MoF* 12-20-03 11:54 AM

illest:

nice beat and flow....i liked the intro and hook....tight track...
voice came on beat...

its bout 7/10

verbal:

also cool beat.....voice came cool but sumtimes off......

id say quality was the same.....

bout 6/10
so tha illest took it...

peace!

...OpeY... 12-22-03 11:37 AM

illest won. good luck to both in week 2


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