Yungheadwrecka vs HARD-ONE
 

10-20 lines
30 min to drop
no free posting
no d/r crew hate votes
good luck

ayo youngheadreckers rap anaylasis cant defeat this\
his lines left out like lettuce to eat it, its not crisp\

now this is how you perform a true diss\
to inflict massive pain to you wannabe antagonist\

after youll spit your shit ill laugh and hinder\
wack lyrics are a sign of hunger nigga, grab a snickers\

even if i was mute i would defeat you easily\
telekenisis structured to defeat you fake emcees\

i cant beleive you would cum spit so weak\
limp shit like that sucumbs to weak seeds\

blowing out hot air bitch , get off ya knees\
lectures like these are hard pressed, but please\

you wanna stick me in a heasrse , i think not\
im spittin shit way beyond one hundred nautical knots\

like don knots, you better leave this to the beaver\
im spittin the heater dogg , you just a retreiver\

the cleverest emcee , known to warm up fevers\
cleaving hearts out so i can releive ya\

your journey ends here kid so dont even spit\
two forks in the road , both lead to eternal bliss\

dont ever come to me spittin this junk\
come back anotha time before i spit a sicker line chump\




11 bars is aight

i'm the best son to win this ya gonna need help: hit f1/
i'm next to none while your bendin words and forcin disses/
you beating me is like windows supporting linux/
cuz your the reason i'm supportin abortion clinics/
You could vomet in my eye and I still wouldn't see your sickness/
Tha doctor said cant circumsize a 2incher well now hes dickless/
Knock you unconcious wit balled fist, throwin ya skeleton in a dark pit/
Make you swallow toilet water and dare you to talk shit/
What happen to yo pre-write you musta misplaced it/
Ya bars make about as much sense as a color blind raciest/
YOU BETTER ASK FAM TO CLOSE THIS SECTION CUZ IM RIPPIN OUT YOUR MID SECTION/
YOU WORSE THAN AL GORE, YOU SAY FUCK DA VOTES I WANT A WHOLE RE-ELECTION/
Ya verse are like celeberty parties, hard to get into/
Only chance you have of gettin signed is if you got a tatto/
Clonein yaself wouldn't help you get a 'double you'/(W/Win)
Youll think this is a 'drug bust' tha way 'blood will spew'/
Deteach one of ya legs and make you 'run a way' like a super model/
Ya flow wouldn't be spicey if you stole lines from a romance novel/
You'll get beat as if I had a palm full of lotion/
Like anthrax victims this nigga right here is very scared of postin/

Explain: U hit F1 on most progs for help
2. Windows linux = diff systems
3. Color blind man cant see colors so why be racist?
4. Ask "Fam" to close this Fam being the whole moderating Family. (Also I thought that was the coldest verse i through down)

Good luck let the votes decide

very one sided battle in favor of Yung
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every catagory goes 2 yung...............................
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Uppin fa votes..... .

i agree with 1liner....this battle is a landslide.....Yung had better vocab, punches, metas, and rhymescheme.....Hard only had the structure in this battle...no need for a breakdown because Yung got every category except for structure....good read from u both though.....no hate...just a vote...

peace
4:20

yung hit the hardest$ nicer punches, wordplay was decent,
disses hit harder, good flow

hard one punches did'nt hit as good$$disses were soft,
he was ite but just did'nt come as hard

i give this battle to hard one, better rhyme scheme, better wordplay, and about equal flow, but he hit harder

T-rex is riding some major dick right there...how the hell...anyway..no personals = loss.....hard-one...no personals...= losss....rhyme was ok, but obviously pre-written and shit...stupid ass bitch.....hit the link up yung

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99123

Uppin for a couple more votes .

yo yung got this because of the fact that he spit, anything would of beat that

good shit yung u won cuz of better punches and personals

hit this up wit votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99005

and my battle in the frontlines

yung takes it.....punches were just more creative and clever. flowed nicer as well. good shit....seen you hit harder...but you spit very appropriately vs. hard one

hard one u had one or 2 lines that had some good concepts but could of been delivered more effectively.. that structure is wack on these longer battles....and the flow was off cuz the lines were to short.

nice battle

vote: YUNG

hit this up dawg....please!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99246